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People think that the public library will be replaced by the computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to technological era. Individuals believe that computer will take place of the public library across the world. I agree to a larger extent with following statement. Technology is increasing rapidly in every sector and it also has several benefits in reading area. The first and foremost, is that without having physical movements every thing is accessible and very convenient to use. As well as, it save a lots of time of people. Moreover, any book can be downloaded and at any time quickly. Besides, it is totally free and there is no issues of library cards and penalties. On the other hand, the public library has its many positive side. To begin with, the environment is very calm and silent, because of which people find easy to focus and concentrate without distraction. Secondly, in library get socialize to same minded reader. And Some book are only available in library. In conclusion, Technology is rising more and more so people perfer E-books instead of library books and i also agree with this, but reading in public library have its own advantages.

Due to technological era. Individuals believe that computer will take place of the public library across the world. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 to a larger extent with following statement.

Technology is increasing rapidly
 in every sector and it also
 has several benefits in reading area. The first
 and foremost, is that without having physical movements every thing is accessible and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 convenient to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. As well
 as, it Did you mean "saves"?saves
save
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?a lotlots
a lots
 of time of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Moreover
, any book can be downloaded
 and at any time quickly
. Besides
, it is totally
 free and Did you mean "there are no issues"?there are no issues
there is no issues
 of library cards and penalties.

On the other hand
, the public library has its This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 side. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the environment is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 calm and silent, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 find easy to focus and concentrate without distraction. Secondly
, in library This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 socialize to same minded reader. And This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
Did you mean "books"?books
book
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 available in library.

In conclusion
, Technology is rising more and more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
Possible spelling mistake found.preferperterper fer
perfer
 E-books instead
 of library books and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 reading in public library have its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 advantages. 