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People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves their families and the society so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?

In the recent times, The Masses are preferred to work on professional aspects for long duration of time. Nevertheless, the humans working for large number of hours in day, would definitely showcases the adverse effects over them, on their in-mates of the family and nation too. Thus, The duration of working time need to be constrained to be specific. In addition, I will emphasize my opinions based on the given arguments in the following consignment. The Extension of Professional hours would definitely consequence with Critical health impacts such as diarrhoea, insomnia, constipation as well as stress. Absolutely, The Individual should consider health to be more crucial whereas without proper body condition a particular person shall not be able to work properly. The human body can be, Admittedly, maintain by including the practices of performing the physical exercises and medication in daily routine. The Devoid physical availability not only with sad ceremonies of friends and neighbours but also in wonderful occasional beginings also. Nevertheless, A person shall definitely loose their respect, good conception over the society. Furthermore, These can be rectified by them and can be pretended attention over it with precedence. Besides, The Work deliverables, client requirements also should be satiated by everyone who are engaged with professionalism. Therefore, The One should not be constrained to work with short span of time. Ultimately, The process would be tedious and not able to achieve the accuracy over the methodoligies and implementation processed by the them. In the Nutshell, The Professional life has more adverse effects on health related aspects and lack respect for the humans. However, The beneficials can be attained with help of smart work. I would like to inclined that working time should be constrained whereas it prevents the human from critical scenarios.
In the recent
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times
, The Masses
are preferred
to
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work
on professional aspects for long duration of
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time
.
Nevertheless
, the
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humans
working for large number of hours in day, would definitely
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showcases
the adverse effects
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over
them, on their in-mates of the family and nation too.
Thus
, The duration of working
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time
need to
be constrained
to be specific.
In addition
, I will emphasize my opinions based

on the
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given
arguments in the following consignment.

The Extension of Professional hours would definitely
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consequence with
Critical health impacts such as
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diarrhoea
, insomnia, constipation
as well
as
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stress
.
Absolutely
, The Individual should consider health to be more crucial whereas without proper body condition a particular person shall not be able to
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work
properly
. The
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human
body can be,
Admittedly
, maintain by including the practices of performing the physical exercises and medication in daily routine.

The Devoid physical availability not
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only
with sad ceremonies of friends and
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neighbours
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but
also
in wonderful occasional
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beginings
also
.
Nevertheless
, A person shall definitely
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loose
their respect,
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good
conception
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over
the society.
Furthermore
, These can
be rectified
by them and can
be pretended
attention
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over
it with precedence.

Besides
, The
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Work
deliverables, client requirements
also
should
be satiated
by everyone who
are engaged
with professionalism.
Therefore
, The One should not
be constrained
to
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work
with short span of
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time
.
Ultimately
, The process would be tedious and not able to achieve the accuracy
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over
the
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methodoligies
and implementation processed by
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the them
.

In the Nutshell, The Professional life has more adverse effects on health related aspects and lack respect for the
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humans
.
However
, The
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beneficials can
be attained
with
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help
of smart
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work
. I would like to inclined that working
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time
should
be constrained


whereas it
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prevents
the
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human
from critical scenarios.
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IELTS essay People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves their families and the society so working hours should be restricted.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
294 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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