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people tend to use a lot of plastic bag although it’s harmful to environment habitat while others thought using this kind of bags should be forbidden by government.

people tend to use a lot of plastic bag although it’s harmful to environment habitat while others thought using this kind of bags should be forbidden by government. 2RpM6
In the modern world, people tend to use a lot of plastic bag although it’s harmful to environment habitat while others thought using this kind of bags should be forbidden by government To begin with, plastic polythene has a great impact on the surrounding environment because of its non-biodegradable nature. Especially, soil is the main resource to help grow crops, it's extremely harmful for land when plastic waste has existed under the ground during a period time. For instance, these make the soil could be reduced the value such as it didn't keep water result in lost nutrients and beneficial bacteria. In addition, this type of household garbage is inadvertently responsible for claiming the lives of aquatic animals. Obviously, many species of organisms do not discriminate between garbage and food leading to their sudden death. Drawing from the disadvantages of plastic we need to do any ways to end the use it as soon as possible. First, raising people’s awareness about environmental is among the effective ways to tackle the situation. Contests and propaganda on social networks, for example to help they have thought insight into natural resources around as well as different types of garbage can be distinguished such as recyclables and non-recyclables. Another possible remedy is to enforce stricter punishments and etiquette along with reeducate them on garbage regulation, encourage the creation of other bags to replace polythene bags, even ban the sales plastic materials. In conclusion, the local authorities should prohibit the usage of plastic bags assists curtailing water and land pollution. I thought that each individual need to ensure that they understand the impact of it with the environment and give feasible solutions.
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plastic
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although it’s harmful to environment habitat while others
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using this kind of
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government


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begin
with,
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polythene has a great impact on the surrounding environment
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because
of its non-biodegradable nature.
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, soil is the main resource to
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help
grow crops, it's
extremely
harmful for land when
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plastic
waste has existed under the ground during a period time.
For instance
, these
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make
the soil could be
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reduced
the value such as it didn't
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keep
water result in lost nutrients and beneficial bacteria.
In addition
, this type of household garbage is
inadvertently
responsible for claiming the
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lives
of aquatic animals.
Obviously
,
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many
species of organisms do not discriminate between garbage and food leading to their sudden death.

Drawing from the disadvantages of
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plastic
we need to do any ways to
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end
the
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use
it as
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soon
as possible.
First
, raising
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people
’s awareness about environmental is among the effective ways to tackle the situation. Contests and propaganda on social networks,
for example
to
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help
they have
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thought
insight into natural resources around
as well
as
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different
types of garbage can
be distinguished
such as recyclables and non-recyclables. Another possible remedy is to enforce stricter punishments and etiquette along with reeducate them on garbage regulation, encourage the creation of other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bags
to replace polythene
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bags
, even ban the sales
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
materials.

In conclusion
, the local authorities should prohibit the usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bags
assists curtailing water and land pollution. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that each individual need to ensure that they understand the impact of it with the environment and give feasible solutions.

IELTS essay people tend to use a lot of plastic bag although it’s harmful to environment habitat while others thought using this kind of bags should be forbidden by government.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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