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People often complain that products are not made to last. They feel that making products that wear out fairly quickly wastes both natural and human resources. What they fail to see, however, is that such manufacturing practices keep costs down for the consumer and stimulate demand"

A number of people complain that making products are not lasting, and they obliges that making products that wear out fairly quickly wastes both natural and human resources. However, people feel that such manufacturing products keep cost down for the consumer and estimate demand. This essay will discuss both of the two opinions that products which are wastes for natural and human resources, and costs down for the consumer and stimulate demand. Some of products which are making by many industrial companies are not made to fast. People feel that making products that wear out fairly quickly is harmful for our nature and human. For example, many garments factories make cloths, or food companies make a plethora of food products wear out quickly, and make a waste for both natural and human resources. In addition, there are lots of chemical industries, when they are throwing their wastes into the environment, the nature become pollutate. Moreover, that wastes is harmful for our human life, because of when people are not get fresh air form the environment, they are attacked by various diseases like heart problem, or brain doesn’t work properly. On the other hand, people fail to see that such manufacturing process keep costs down for customer and increase the demand. Firstly, manufacturing companies make their products in cheap price; for that reason, they can sell their products to the customers at low price. For example, UNILIVER is one of the biggest company, and every year they produce various kinds of products, so that they can make their products in such a way, and a low price. At a result, this company can easily increase their company’s demand, and they can easily provide a good products to the customers. In conclusion, sometimes wastes both natural and human resources are complained by the people’s, but that such manufacturing practice keep the price down and increase the companies demand.
A number of
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people
complain that making
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products
are not lasting, and they
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obliges
that making
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products
that wear out
fairly
quickly
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wastes
both
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natural
and
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human
resources.
However
,
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people
feel that such
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manufacturing
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products
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keep
cost
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down
for the consumer and estimate
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demand
. This essay will discuss both of the two opinions that
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products
which are
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wastes
for
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natural
and
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human
resources, and costs
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down
for the consumer and stimulate demand.

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of
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products
which are making by
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industrial
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companies
are not made to
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fast
.
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People
feel that making
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products
that wear out
fairly
quickly
is harmful for our nature and
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human
.
For example
,
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many
garments factories
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make
cloths, or food
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companies
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make
a plethora of food
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products
wear out
quickly
, and
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make
a
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waste
for both
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natural
and
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human
resources.
In addition
, there are lots of chemical industries, when they are throwing their
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wastes
into the environment, the nature become
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pollutate
.
Moreover
, that
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wastes
is harmful for our
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human
life,
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because
of when
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people
are not
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get
fresh air form the environment, they
are attacked
by various diseases like heart problem, or brain doesn’t work
properly
.

On the other hand
,
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people
fail to
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see
that such
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manufacturing
process
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keep
costs
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down
for customer and increase the
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demand
.
Firstly
,
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manufacturing
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companies
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make
their
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products
in
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cheap
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price
; for that reason, they can sell their
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products
to the customers at low
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price
.
For example
,
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UNILIVER
is one of the biggest
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company
, and every year they produce various kinds of
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products
,
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so
that they can
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make
their
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products
in such a way, and a low
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price
. At a result, this
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company
can
easily
increase their
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company’s
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demand
, and they can
easily
provide a
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good
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products
to the customers.

In conclusion
,
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sometimes
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wastes
both
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natural
and
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human
resources
are complained
by the
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people’s
,
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that such
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manufacturing
practice
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keep
the
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price
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down
and increase the
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companies
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demand
.
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IELTS essay People often complain that products are not made to last. They feel that making products that wear out fairly quickly wastes both natural and human resources. What they fail to see, however, is that such manufacturing practices keep costs down for the consumer and stimulate demand"

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  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
6.0
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