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People from all over the world especially in urban areas risk exposure to traffic problems as well as traffic-related pollution.

People from all over the world especially in urban areas risk exposure to traffic problems as well as traffic-related pollution. OV66N
People from all over the world especially in urban areas risk exposure to traffic problems as well as traffic-related pollution. Therefore, some people point out that the price of petrol should be charged in high range to minimize the use of fuel. In my opinion, by doing so, I strongly disagree with this suggestion because there are many other effective strategies and interventions for traffic problems that have been outperformed in many different nations. Regarding traffic congestion, most of the people from urban regions have been suffered from traffic jam issues over many years. The governments have been improving ways for public transport for many decades, but some cities remain failing. One thing is that the governments should improve on urban policy interventions and traffic engineering. TO begin with, the protocols such as setting more traffic lights on the main avenues, marking more specific signs and designing appropriate intersections on roads should be explored and undertaken. Moreover, widening roads and providing adequate space for pedestrians should not be ruled out. Many organizations and governments have become aware of how important pedestrian safety is. In terms of traffic pollution, people from urban areas become experiencing risks from traffic-related air pollution. It is estimated that more than two-third of the urban population is likely to suffer from health-related problems like respiratory, cardiovascular and psychological issues because of traffic emissions. For that reason, gases emitted from cars and trains should be reduced by using alternative vehicle technology such as electric cars and bicycles in some areas. In India, it can be seen that urban policy interventions as low emission zone, vehicle emission rules and alternative vehicle use have been implemented effectively. Another intervention is that we should encourage on using public transport service instead of private cars. By doing so, human exposures and health impacts can be reduced significantly. In summary, I believe that there are many mediation and protocols regarding traffic management for congestion and pollution rather than fixing on petrol price. Additionally, governments should focus attention on people to promote awareness and a better understanding of urban transportation interference and regulations.
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point out that the price of petrol should
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other effective strategies and
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problems that have
been outperformed
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nations.

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congestion, most of the
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from
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regions have
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jam issues over
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years. The
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governments
have been improving ways for public transport for
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decades,
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cities remain failing. One thing is that the
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traffic
engineering. TO
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begin
with, the protocols such as setting more
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traffic
lights on the main avenues, marking more specific signs and designing appropriate intersections on roads should
be explored
and undertaken.
Moreover
, widening roads and providing adequate space for pedestrians should not
be ruled
out.
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Many
organizations and
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governments
have become aware of how
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pedestrian safety is.

In terms of
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traffic
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,
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people
from
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areas become experiencing
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risks
from traffic-related air
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pollution
. It
is estimated
that more than two-third of the
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urban
population is likely to suffer from health-related problems like respiratory, cardiovascular and psychological issues
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because
of
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traffic
emissions. For that reason, gases emitted from cars and trains should be
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reduced
by using alternative vehicle technology such as electric cars and bicycles in
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some
areas. In India, it can be
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urban
policy
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interventions
as low emission zone, vehicle emission
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rules
and alternative vehicle
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use
have
been implemented
effectively
. Another
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intervention
is that we should encourage on using public transport service
instead
of private cars. By doing
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so
, human exposures and health impacts can be
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reduced
significantly
.

In summary, I believe that there are
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many
mediation and protocols regarding
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traffic
management for congestion and
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pollution
rather
than fixing on petrol price.
Additionally
,
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governments
should focus attention on
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people
to promote awareness and a better understanding of
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urban
transportation interference and regulations.
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IELTS essay People from all over the world especially in urban areas risk exposure to traffic problems as well as traffic-related pollution.

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350 words
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