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As a many type of assessment of person for learning and writing, pen and paper can be estimated as a standard for measuring. This method can be seen as a many of country or company for accepting people. Pen and paper has known as assessment of people for starting new area in their life. for example, most of universities around the world are used this way for knowing who wants to join to their university. This way can be showed the power of thinking and writing of each people for many type of essay. It is motivated way to keep people writing for commit everything. For example, they can write any kind of essay such as history or culture of their past for next generations, or can be written for education. Pen and paper are made for spread any knowledge around the world for who are interested in discovering anything about where they live. However, it has many advantages in our life, it has included many disadvantage. this method need to spend many time for learning and writing, so it can be made boring everybody if it is not use as a good way. In other hand, it can be disappointed for who are not very interested in reading. it can be made for leading people to wrong way by misunderstand if writer was not very good at as a teacher for transferring information to readers. It is counted as the best way to know who can be use wide range of vocabulary and grammar, but it could not be clear for another thing such as speaking. Overall, this can be knew as a part of estimation of each person in academic or general working for who want to be join as a partner for foreigner country.
As a
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many type
of assessment of person for learning and
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writing
, pen and paper can
be estimated
as a standard for measuring. This method can be
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seen
as a
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many
of country or
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company
for accepting
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people
.

Pen and paper has known as assessment of
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people
for starting new area in their life.
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for
example,
After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the universities") or simply say "most universities".
most of universities
around the world are
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used
this way for knowing
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who
wants to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
to their university. This way can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
the power of thinking and
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writing
of each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
for
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many type
of essay. It
is motivated
way to
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keep
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people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
writing
for commit everything.
For example
, they can write any kind of essay such as history or culture of their past for
next
generations, or can
be written
for education. Pen and paper
are made
for spread any knowledge around the world for
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who
are interested
in discovering anything about where they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
.

However
, it has
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many
advantages in our life, it has included
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many disadvantage
.
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this
method need to spend
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many time
for learning and
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writing
,
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so
it can
be made
boring everybody if it is not
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use
as a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
way. In other hand, it can
be disappointed
for
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who
are not
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very
interested in reading.
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it
can
be made
for leading
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people
to
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wrong
way by misunderstand if writer was not
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very
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good
at as a teacher for transferring information to readers. It
is counted
as the best way to know
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who
can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
wide range of vocabulary and grammar,
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but
it could not be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
for another thing such as speaking.

Overall
, this can be
Consider using a past participle here: "known".
knew
as a part of estimation of each person in academic or general working for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
want to be
Consider using a past participle here: "joined".
join
as a partner for foreigner country.
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IELTS essay pen and paper for education

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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