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Parents are the ultimate role models for children. As kids imitate their parents in the childhood, they adapt most of their moral values and virtues in their personalities, which highly reflects when they grow up. Needless to say, their ability to learn and education plays an important role but more than that how much a parents contributes in teaching a child. To begin with, sharing a major amount of time with adolescents is a primary factor here followed by attention. For instance, many parents observe their kids a lot, and they get to know about their merits and demerits as individuals. By the time, these kids transform into individuals they have already overcome their most of the demerits leading to their high success rate. Secondly, love and care are other two important factors which adds up empathy, understanding, basic human values in a child. To illustrate, when parents show more affection to their kids from time to time, it results in enhancement of their ability to learn and cooperate with society and themselves. Otherwise, the adults often struggle with their own beliefs and mindsets and aren’t able to cope up with their goals. Besides, parents who maintain discipline and consistency seem to have an advantage over all other factors. In particular, discipline results in more freedom: that’s when the young people focus on succeeding towards their goals. For many, this can be a stepping stone in influencing a change in the world in future, which can be only possible with parent’s influence. All in a word, parents are the best teachers as they play a great role in building us individually, be it moral values or academics, they endlessly support us by placing a stepping stone which further leads to a milestone.
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transform into individuals they have already overcome their most of the demerits leading to their high success rate.

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are the best teachers as they play a great role in building us
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support us by placing a stepping stone which
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leads to a milestone.
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IELTS essay Parents teachers

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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