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Owning house among society opinion essay

Owning house among society opinion essay R595p

In several countries, for someone to have his own house rather than actually renting one is considered a significant basic right for every human being, while, there are a number of people admitting that renting a house is very beneficial, I believe that having your own property can lead to numerous profits like, individual satisfaction. Owning your favorite house could lead to your individual well being, because your own property is designed as you like, even u don’t have to pay every month a charge (fee), for example, there was an foreign man that wanted to rent a house because of the fact that the rented house that he wanted is actually close to his office, nevertheless, this did not been too long because he couldn’t afford it. from this perspective I could say that human can gain individual well being only by minding his ownership. Moreover, most of the houses would likely be located far away from cities or the disturbing neighbors that mostly surrounds the rented flats, houses could make a huge advantage on this situation, for instance, since 2013 I have faced considerably many problems in rented flats, muggers and drunk people had broke into my flat a plenty of times seeking for anything to steal, however, this kind of problems didn’t occur till today. To sum up, I believe that owning your house can give you wide variety of things to access on for example, safety, away from distribution and also no one can interfere about your ownership.

In several countries, for someone to have his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
rather
 than actually renting one is considered
 a significant basic right for every human being, while, there are a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 admitting that renting a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 beneficial, I believe that having your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 property can lead to numerous profits like, individual satisfaction.

Owning your favorite You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 could lead to your individual This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-being
well being
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 property is designed
 as you like, even u don’t This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay every month a charge (fee), for example
, there was Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 foreign This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 that wanted to rent a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "because".because
because of the fact that
 the rented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 that he wanted is actually close to his office, nevertheless
, this did not been too long This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he couldn’t afford it. from this perspective I could say that human can gain individual This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-being
well being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 by minding his ownership.

Moreover
, most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 would likely be located
 far away from cities or the disturbing neighbors that mostly
 surrounds the rented flats, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a huge advantage on this situation, for instance
, since 2013 I have faced considerably
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 problems in rented flats, muggers and drunk This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 had Use the past participle "broken" after the modal (auxiliary) verb 'had'.broken
broke
 into my flat a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of times seeking for anything to steal, however
, this kind of problems didn’t occur till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

To sum up, I believe that owning your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 can give you wide variety of things to access on for example
, safety, away from distribution and also
 no one can interfere about your ownership. 