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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. 7MO5
Now-a-days, as a result of urbanization, cities have become overcrowded, which resulted in several complications. This essay will suggest that biggest problems caused by this phenomenon are pollution and scarcity of water and then submit usage of public transport and building reservoirs as viable solutions. The most common problem in all major urban areas is pollution, due to vast number of people living in those areas. As population increases pollution levels rise as a result of increased usage of private vehicles to commute. Furthermore, water consumption has climbed enormously. Hence, ground wells and rivers have almost dried up in these areas, and now they do not have enough water to survive. For instance, in 2019, the Delhi state released a report stating that 500 out of every 1000 bore wells in the state dried up, whereas there is no sign of water in 200 out if 380 newly dug bore wells. It is pivotal to address these problems or else they can be detrimental in near future. Water is very essential for survival; hence, it is important that we preserve it. The respective governments should construct more reservoirs to preserve rain as well as flood water, and individuals should have their own rain harvesting system to collect rain water and use it precisely. Secondly, if each person reduces the carbon footprints by using public transport such as metros, bus and rail, it is possible to keep a check on pollution levels and breathe fresh and healthy air. The Telangana government stated there has been a curb in pollution levels since the inauguration of the Metro project in 2018, as a lot of public is using it to travel. In conclusion, it is evident that urban areas are prone to problems such as pollution and scarcity of water, due to dense population, which can be addressed by using public transport and preservation of water. Therefore, it is necessary that both public and government should divert their energies in solving these issues.
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Now
-a-days,
as a result
of urbanization, cities have become overcrowded, which resulted in several complications. This essay will suggest that biggest
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problems
caused by this phenomenon are
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pollution
and scarcity of
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water
and then submit usage of
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public
transport and building reservoirs as viable solutions.

The most common
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problem
in all major urban
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areas
is
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pollution
, due to vast number of
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people
living in those
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areas
. As population increases
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pollution
levels rise
as a result
of increased usage of private vehicles to commute.
Furthermore
,
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water
consumption has climbed
enormously
.
Hence
, ground wells and rivers have almost dried up in these
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areas
, and
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now
they do not have
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enough
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water
to survive.
For instance
, in 2019, the Delhi state released a report stating that 500 out of every 1000 bore wells in the state dried up, whereas there is no
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sign
of
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water
in 200 out if 380
newly
dug bore wells.

It is pivotal to address these
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problems
or else they can be detrimental in near future.
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Water
is
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very
essential for survival;
hence
, it is
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important
that we preserve it. The respective
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governments
should construct more reservoirs to preserve rain
as well
as flood
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water
, and individuals should have their
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own
rain harvesting system to collect rain
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water
and
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use
it
precisely
.
Secondly
, if each person
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reduces
the carbon footprints by using
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public
transport such as metros, bus and rail, it is possible to
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keep
a
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check
on
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pollution
levels and breathe fresh and healthy air. The Telangana
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government
stated there has been a curb in
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pollution
levels since the inauguration of the Metro project in 2018, as
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a lot of
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public
is using it to travel.

In conclusion
, it is evident that urban
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areas
are prone to
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problems
such as
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pollution
and scarcity of
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water
, due to dense population, which can
be addressed
by using
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public
transport and preservation of
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water
.
Therefore
, it is necessary that both
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public
and
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government
should divert their energies in solving these issues.
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IELTS essay Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
330 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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