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Overall, will the future be better or worse for humanity?

Overall, will the future be better or worse for humanity? E3q5r
There is a growing concern about it is going to be better or worst in the future. I think it can be both better or worse in the future while I have know idea that the world becoming a much better place because from now there are lots of problems in the world such as economic and air pollution. Many countries have been encountered with these issues. One reason from the imbalance between demand and available resources because it is an economic problem for everyone, every family, every community, every society and every country or every economic system will inevitably suffer because they all have limited resources in comparison to their needs. Another reason is that the air pollution in Thailand, it is very dangerous for people who do not wear mask when they are going outside because there are lots of dense weather, traffic congestion, and open-burning. These are making people get problem with the respiratory system, it is very small dust called pm2. 5. To give an illustration, there are many problems affecting the world from now whether it is economy or air pollution that affects people for difficult to work or live with happiness. But if we help each other to maintain cooperation, I believe that maybe in the future there might be improved in the future. I am convinced that there not to say the future will be without problems or that problems are definitely going to be better or worse than ours.
There is a growing concern about it is going to be
better
or worst in the
future
. I
think
it can be both
better
or worse in the
future
while I have know
idea
that the world becoming a much
better
place
because
from
now
there are lots of
problems
in the world such as economic and air pollution.
Many
countries have
been encountered
with these issues.

One reason from the imbalance between demand and available resources
because
it is an economic
problem
for everyone, every family, every community, every society and every country or every economic system will
inevitably
suffer
because
they all have limited resources
in comparison
to their needs.

Another reason is that the air pollution in Thailand, it is
very
dangerous
for
people
who do not wear mask when they are going outside
because
there are lots of dense weather, traffic congestion, and open-burning. These are making
people
get
problem
with the respiratory system, it is
very
small
dust called pm2. 5.

To give an illustration, there are
many
problems
affecting the world from
now
whether it is economy or air pollution that affects
people
for difficult to work or
live
with happiness.
But
if we
help
each other to maintain cooperation, I believe that maybe in the
future
there might be
improved
in the future.

I
am convinced
that there not to say the
future
will be without
problems
or that
problems
are definitely going to be
better
or worse than ours.
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IELTS essay Overall, will the future be better or worse for humanity?

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