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Organizing Olympic games are always a big topic for countries since their launch.

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Organizing Olympic games are always a big topic for countries since their launch. Policymakers and citizens often argue whether these games promote unity and integrity between nations or means of losing economy instead of focusing and eliminating major social problems. This essay will explore arguments for both sides by collaborating personal views to aid readers in coming to their conclusions. A few observations offer support to the fact that this four-ring symbol which listed multiple games invites participants from diverse nations. This participation is irrespective of the caste, race, color, and religion of the players which maintains unity and integrity that helps them to socialize with an understanding of different cultures. Moreover, people travel from their origin nations to promote the contestants which bring foreign currency and tourism in the organizing country that helps to boost the economy. For example; People visiting once during the scheduling period, if find the environment favorable, can accompany with their relatives and friends in the future. Despite the above arguments, taking care of these games from start to end will need the financial stability of the organizer as more money is needed to become a good host. Instead, if this money allocated to resolve the common issues related to the living of people and fulfilling basic necessities, the entire nation will succeed in eliminating them from its roots. For example: In India, when commonwealth games were held, most of the country's budget spent on the living and shelter of participants while the majority of people of their own are still struggling for shed and starving from hunger. According to me, one should always analyze by considering the positive and negative aspects before taking up any challenges. This famous idiom shows that nation should always consider their socio-economic issues before committing or contributing to others. Undoubtedly optimism and pessimism around the factors involving organizing these sports will continue in the near future. However, the best recommendation for those who caught in within the debate, would include considerations of the above options.
Organizing Olympic
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are always a
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topic for countries since their launch. Policymakers and citizens
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often
argue whether these
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games
promote unity and integrity between
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nations
or means of losing economy
instead
of focusing and eliminating major social problems. This essay will explore arguments for both sides by collaborating personal views to aid readers in coming to their conclusions.

A few observations offer support to the fact that this four-ring symbol which listed multiple
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games
invites participants from diverse
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nations
. This participation is irrespective of the caste, race, color, and religion of the players which maintains unity and integrity that
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helps
them to socialize with an understanding of
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different
cultures.
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,
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people
travel from their origin
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nations
to promote the contestants which bring foreign currency and tourism in the organizing country that
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helps
to boost the economy.
For example
;
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People
visiting once during the scheduling period, if find the environment favorable, can
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accompany with
their relatives and friends in the future.

Despite the above arguments, taking care of these
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games
from
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start
to
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end
will need the financial stability of the organizer as more money
is needed
to become a
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good
host.
Instead
, if this money allocated to resolve the common issues related to the living of
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people
and fulfilling
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basic necessities
, the entire
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nation
will succeed in eliminating them from its roots.
For example
: In India, when commonwealth
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games
were held
, most of the country's budget spent on the living and shelter of participants while the majority of
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people
of their
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own
are
still
struggling for shed and starving from hunger.

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, one should always analyze by considering the
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positive
and
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negative
aspects
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before
taking up any challenges. This
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famous
idiom
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shows
that
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nation
should always consider their
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socio-economic
issues
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before
committing or contributing to others.

Undoubtedly
optimism and pessimism around the factors involving organizing these sports will continue in the near future.
However
, the best recommendation for those who caught in within the debate, would include considerations of the above options.
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IELTS essay Organizing Olympic games are always a big topic for countries since their launch.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
336 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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