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Opinion nuclear weapons is good or bad

The international peace is preserved by the menace of atomic weapons, and besides that nuclear power supplies inexpensive and pure energy. The utilities of nuclear technology are more considerable than its minuses. This essay partially agrees with the opinion that emphasizes the advantages of nuclear technologies, because atomic power provides much more energy than other sources such as wind, sun and coal, and in the interim, the safety level of nuclear energy has always been questionable as it causes radiation nearby and the security costs are noticeably higher than any other plants. Initially, the progress of nuclear technology commenced to flourish after following the devastatingon of World War II and the year 1945 was the inception of nuclear development afterwards. Furthermore, the nuclear researcher A. Hanks found out that the energy which produced from nuclear plants worth significant amounts of money than any other energy origins, especially it outweighed the power manufacture of coal industry which had a tremendous impact on the corresponding production area. The security issues which are related to the nuclear technologies are one the most perilous threats to not only humanity, but also flora and fauna. Therefore, the locations of such plants should be scrutinized. After the Chernobyl accident (in 1986) numerous countries shut down the nuclear plants and nowadays Germany is the solely nation that keeps nuclear plants operational, although the expenses of safety measures are remarkably high. From what has been discussed above we may conclude that, the profits of nuclear technology are significant as the energy output is notably high, whilst keeping atomic plants operational demands quite high amounts of cash and it is not environmentally friendly.

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 by the menace of atomic weapons, and besides
 that nuclear power supplies inexpensive and pure You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
. The utilities of nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 are more considerable than its minuses. This essay partially
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agrees
 with the opinion that emphasizes the advantages of nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technologies
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 atomic power provides much more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 than other sources such as wind, sun and coal, and in the interim, the safety level of nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 has always been questionable as it causes radiation nearby and the security costs are noticeably
 higher than any other plants.

Initially
, the progress of nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 commenced to flourish after following the Possible spelling mistake found.devastating on
devastatingon
 of World War II and the year 1945 was the inception of nuclear development afterwards. Furthermore
, the nuclear researcher A. Hanks found out that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 which produced from nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflowershrubtreevinegrassseedling
plants
 worth significant amounts of money than any other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 origins, especially
 it outweighed the power manufacture of coal industry which had a tremendous impact on the corresponding production area.

The security issues which are related
 to the nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technologies
 are Did you mean “one of”?one of
one
 the most perilous threats to not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 humanity, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 flora and fauna. Therefore
, the locations of such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflowershrubtreevinegrassseedling
plants
 should be scrutinized
. After the Chernobyl accident (in 1986) numerous countries shut down the nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflowershrubtreevinegrassseedling
plants
 and nowadays Germany is the You used an adverb (‘solely’) instead of an adjective, or a noun (‘nation’) instead of another adjective.sole nation
solely nation
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflowershrubtreevinegrassseedling
plants
 operational, although the expenses of safety measures are remarkably
 high.

From what has been discussed
 above we may conclude that, the profits of nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 are significant as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 output is notably
 high, whilst keeping atomic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflowershrubtreevinegrassseedling
plants
 operational demands quite high amounts of Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).cash, and
cash and
 it is not environmentally
 friendly. 