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Nowadays, people prefer to live and work anywhere they want because of the improvement in transportation and technology. Discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of this?

Nowadays, people prefer to live and work anywhere they want because of the improvement in transportation and technology. Discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of this? ywMM
In these days, advancement of transportation and technology made easier to live and work anywhere they want. This development have both advantage and disadvantage are discusse following paragraphs. To start with, There are many advantage of the people live anywhere they want. Firstly, People live with their family and spent quality time with the members. In addition to this, trasnport make easy to traval one place to other place so individuals can traval in minimum time. Second, people cannot feel isolated because they live with their family so they concerntrate on their work properly and also its improve the productivity level. Turning to the other side of the argument work and live from same place has some demerits. Its is barrier for permotion of any individuals because people donot want to migrate another place so they donot promoted. For example, company policy is employee work another place so they received permotion. Moreover, people are not interested in learning new things and pay less attention to their work because they are hurry to return home. In conclusion, live and work from same place benifits are more then its demerits. People should decide to the for very careful so they get success in their life.
In these days, advancement of transportation and technology made easier to
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anywhere they want.
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People
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with their family and spent quality time with the members.
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one
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to other
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individuals can
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in minimum time. Second,
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cannot feel isolated
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they
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live
with their family
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they
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on their
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properly
and
also
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the productivity level. Turning to the other side of the argument
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from same
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has
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demerits. Its is barrier for
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permotion
of any individuals
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want to migrate another
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promoted.
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another
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they received
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are not interested in learning new things and pay less attention to their
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work
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they are
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to return home.
In conclusion
,
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from same
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benifits
are more
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its demerits.
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should decide to the for
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careful
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success in their life.

IELTS essay Nowadays, people prefer to live and work anywhere they want because of the improvement in transportation and technology. Discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of this?

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