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One problem faced by almost every big city is traffic congestion. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

One problem faced by almost every big city is traffic congestion. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Gyxj
Nowadays, traffic jam is serious issue in every urban centers that causes several problems for common people. This essay will highlight root causes of this phenomenon and suggest practical solutions to mitigate it. Perhaps, the major cause of this issue is that high number of vehicle was caused by population and development of economy. In other words, the number of vehicles going traffic is increasing everyday and existing roads are not enough and traffic problem growing. A further reasonable cause is that irrational distribution and lack of conscience make traffic worse and worse. Urban centers in developing countries are expanding so rapidly and contain so many people that room for new roads to handle this new growth is not available. Narrow streets that used to contain mainly bicycles, motorbikes and just a few cars are now clogged with the latter. As for solutions, it is necessary to direct people towards using public transportation instead of widespread using private vehicles especially in rush hours. As the number of vehicles in traffic decreases, traffic will not occur and public transportation vehicles will be able to take you to your destination more quickly. Another viable approach is to construct wide roads and bridges so that traffic can move smoothly during peak hours. Renovating roads, new roads and many more investments should be made for the improvement of traffic. To recapitulate briefly, this essay discussed how the traffic jam is instigated by high number of vehicles and irrational distribution. This essay also suggested two remedies to mitigate the problem: encouraging people to use public transportation and more roads is only temporarily solution. If the above mentioned measures are taken the problem maybe solved viable.
Nowadays,
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traffic
jam is serious issue in every urban centers that
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causes
several
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problems
for common
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people
. This essay will highlight root
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causes
of this phenomenon and suggest practical solutions to mitigate it.

Perhaps, the major
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cause
of this issue is that high
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number
of
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vehicle
was caused
by population and development of economy.
In other words
, the
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number
of
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vehicles
going
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traffic
is increasing
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everyday
and existing
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roads
are not
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enough
and
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traffic
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problem
growing. A
further
reasonable
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cause
is that irrational distribution and lack of conscience
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make
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traffic
worse and worse. Urban centers in
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developing countries
are expanding
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so
rapidly
and contain
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so
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many
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people
that room for new
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roads
to handle this new growth is not available. Narrow streets that
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used
to contain
mainly
bicycles, motorbikes and
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just
a few cars are
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now
clogged with the latter.

As for solutions, it is necessary to direct
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people
towards using public transportation
instead
of widespread using private
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vehicles
especially
in rush hours. As the
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number
of
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vehicles
in
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traffic
decreases,
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traffic
will not occur and public transportation
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vehicles
will be able to take you to your destination more
quickly
. Another viable approach is to construct wide
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roads
and bridges
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so
that
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traffic
can
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move
smoothly
during peak hours. Renovating
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roads
, new
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roads
and
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many
more investments should
be made
for the improvement of traffic.

To recapitulate
briefly
, this essay discussed how the
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traffic
jam
is instigated
by high
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number
of
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vehicles
and irrational distribution. This essay
also
suggested two remedies to mitigate the
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problem
: encouraging
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people
to
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use
public transportation and more
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roads
is
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only
temporarily
solution.
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If
the above mentioned measures
are taken
the
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problem
maybe solved viable.
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IELTS essay One problem faced by almost every big city is traffic congestion. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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