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Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world.

Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world. eRMEp
1, Obeseness is considered as a common health problem which has a negative proliferation in somewhere of the world. In this essay, I will explain presumably for its happen and give some advice to prevent that case. 1, Obeseness is considered as a common health problem which has a negative proliferation in somewhere of the world. In this essay, I will explain presumably for its happen and give some advice to prevent that case.
1,
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Obeseness
is considered
as a common health problem which has a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
proliferation in somewhere of the world. In this essay, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
presumably for its happen and give
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
advice to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
that case. 1,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Obeseness
is considered
as a common health problem which has a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
proliferation in somewhere of the world. In this essay, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
presumably for its happen and give
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
advice to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
that case.

IELTS essay Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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