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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? rRmn
Rubbish and waste are the topics of major concern in the century we live in. I strongly believe that due to the increasing population in our country the rubbish is also increasing. Moreover, the country residents are not literate towards the disposal of the rubbish. As we are developing as a nation and with more economic development the consumption of plastic and non-biodegradable products has shown a tremendous rise in the last decade. The factories are depositing their waste products in the river resulting in the pollution of the water. The chemicals are released in the air, resulting in the air pollution. The numbers of patience and life expectancy rate has shown a dramatic change. Our government can play a critical role in the improvement of environment and reduction in the rubbish. As measures, the government can start the recycling processes by placing recycling bins in the industrial area and common visitor's areas. The government can tie-up with NGOs for and offer them organize public awareness campaigns in the rural and urban area of our country. They can even establish schemes to get rid of the rubbish. The scheme which states to collect, deposit waste and get free grocery equivalent to the weight of grocery. This can be a classic initiative to get employment for low income group of people. On a stringent mode, the government can impose heavy fines for the rule violators. Moreover, to start a new factory or to renew a license for existing factories, they should develop a green belt zone in their proximity to make the country pollution free. The best practices to reduce the rubbish from around the globe should be considered. Prominently UAE could be considered as one of the best nations taking steps to reduce the rubbish. They step-up many clean drives, namely Clean-up UAE, sewage treatment plants, biodegradable plants etc. In conclusion, the country and it's residents should take it as moral responsibility to reduce the waste and make our country pollution free and greener place to live in.
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Rubbish
and
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waste
are the topics of major concern in the century we
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live
in. I
strongly
believe that due to the increasing population in our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
is
also
increasing.
Moreover
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
residents are not literate towards the disposal of the rubbish.

As we are developing as a nation and with more economic development the consumption of plastic and non-biodegradable products has shown a tremendous rise in the last decade. The factories are depositing their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
products in the river resulting in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
of the water. The chemicals
are released
in the air, resulting in the air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
numbers of patience and life expectancy rate has shown a dramatic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
.

Our
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government
can play a critical role in the improvement of environment and reduction in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
. As measures, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the recycling processes by placing recycling bins in the industrial area and common visitor's areas.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
can tie-up with NGOs for and offer them organize public awareness campaigns in the rural and urban area of our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
. They can even establish schemes to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
rid of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
. The scheme which states to collect, deposit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
free grocery equivalent to the weight of grocery. This can be a classic initiative to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
employment for low income group of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

On a stringent mode, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
can impose heavy fines for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
violators.
Moreover
, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
a new factory or to renew a license for existing factories, they should develop a green belt zone in their proximity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
free.

The best practices to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
from around the globe should
be considered
.
Prominently
UAE could
be considered
as one of the best nations taking steps to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
. They step-up
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
clean drives,
namely
Clean-up UAE, sewage treatment plants, biodegradable plants etc.

In conclusion
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
and it's residents should take it as moral responsibility to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
free and greener place to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in.
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IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
338 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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