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Nowadays, people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy

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This days some people live in the society where consume goods aren't expensive to buy. I wrote about advantage sides this condition related to my experience in my essay. On the one hand, some poor people needs good but cheaper to buy things. Certainly they want to buy cheaper things and they should live suitable for themselves. Not only poor but rich people want to buy good but cheaper things. Everybody first look at quality of products. On the other hand, absolutely they are live suitable for yourself place this is good and useful for their money because some people live bads are expensive to buy but this cost un-suited their money so all of the people could living want to yourself and suitable for themselves. Taking everything into consideration, just as a coin has a two sides. All people living want to yourself because he or she first think yourself behavior so they do this work related to own ide
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in the society where consume
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buy
. I wrote about advantage sides this condition related to my experience in my essay.

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people
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buy
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buy
cheaper
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live
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rich
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good
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cheaper things. Everybody
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suitable for yourself place this is
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good
and useful for their money
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people
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want
to yourself and suitable for themselves.

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IELTS essay Nowadays, people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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