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Nowadays, people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy.

Nowadays, people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy. 6PgW
These days it is believed that people live in a society where you can find any product with affordable cost. To the point of my thinking, it has more positive sites than negative ones and following paragraphs prove my mind by giving exact examples based on my own knowledge. Initially, because of the income of some people, they would like to have goods with lower prices and it is not bad idea. Since everyone try to find out suitable cost but also high quality of product. But usually it is a bit more difficult to do successfully. Why can't we find products with affordable prices? Because most premium goods need bigger outcome and it causes the increase of the price. That's why, it is not so beneficial to buy anything with low costs. Whereas in some cases, you can highlight the good points of this issue. For example, people would have more choices to buy something if the price is low and, moreover, people who live in poverty can easily afford any product according to their wish. It is not inexact that the demand is high for inexpensive foods, clothes and so on and by this way the diversity of products may increase proportionally. But the low price of foods sometimes indicates the low quality of food and it is good to avoid them. In conclusion, it can be claimed with no hesitation that affordability of goods has more advantages than downsides and by previous statements I have tried to clarify my opinion with examples relying on my own mind.
These days it
is believed
that
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people
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live
in a society where you can find any
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product
with affordable cost. To the point of my thinking, it has more
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positive
sites than
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negative
ones and following paragraphs prove my mind by giving exact examples based on my
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own
knowledge.

Initially
,
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because
of the income of
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some
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people
, they would like to have
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goods
with lower
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prices
and it is not
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bad
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idea
. Since everyone
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try
to find out suitable cost
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but
also
high quality of
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product
.
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But
usually
it is a bit more difficult to do
successfully
. Why can't we find
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products
with affordable
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prices
?
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Because
most premium
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goods
need bigger outcome and it causes the increase of the
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price
. That's why, it is not
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so
beneficial to
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buy
anything with
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low
costs.

Whereas in
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some
cases, you can highlight the
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good
points of this issue.
For example
,
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people
would have more choices to
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buy
something if the
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price
is
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low
and,
moreover
,
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people
who
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live
in poverty can
easily
afford any
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product
according to their wish. It is not inexact that the demand is high for inexpensive foods, clothes and
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so
on and by this way the diversity of
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products
may increase
proportionally
.
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But
the
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low
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price
of foods
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sometimes
indicates the
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low
quality of food and it is
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good
to avoid them.

In conclusion
, it can
be claimed
with no hesitation that affordability of
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goods
has more advantages than downsides and by previous statements I have tried to clarify my opinion with examples relying on my
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own
mind.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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