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As e-book develops ,newspapers reading is declining

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Ile the increment of e-books soured the alight in paper books. Some humans behold this a nice step forward while others do not. I wrote about advantages and disadvantages this statement in my essay. On the one hand, the advantage of e-books are good for everyone becouse we do not look for books in library and other places and we read those books on the phone. However another advantage is that is saves money, so we do not have to buy the books we need on the phone. On the other hand, the disadvantage of e-books is that if we read books on the phone of course it is bad for our health, especially for our eyes. Another downside is that when we read a books on the phone, it distract us and we waste a lot of our precious time. Taking everything into consideration just as there are two sides to a coin, there are good and bad sides to everything. In my opinion although e-books heve their disadvantages, they have many advantages.
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and disadvantages this statement in my essay.

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of e-books are
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for everyone
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in library and other
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Taking everything into consideration
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IELTS essay As e-book develops, newspapers reading is declining

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
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