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As e-book develops ,newspapers reading is declining

As e-book develops, newspapers reading is declining 872V
Ile the increment of e-books soured the alight in paper books. Some humans behold this a nice step forward while others do not. I wrote about advantages and disadvantages this statement in my essay. On the one hand, the advantage of e-books are good for everyone becouse we do not look for books in library and other places and we read those books on the phone. However another advantage is that is saves money, so we do not have to buy the books we need on the phone. On the other hand, the disadvantage of e-books is that if we read books on the phone of course it is bad for our health, especially for our eyes. Another downside is that when we read a books on the phone, it distract us and we waste a lot of our precious time. Taking everything into consideration just as there are two sides to a coin, there are good and bad sides to everything. In my opinion although e-books heve their disadvantages, they have many advantages.
Ile
the increment of e-books soured the alight in paper
books
.
Some
humans behold this a nice step forward while others do not. I wrote about
advantages
and disadvantages this statement in my essay.

On the one hand, the
advantage
of e-books are
good
for everyone
becouse
we do not look for
books
in library and other
places and
we read those
books
on the phone.
However
another
advantage
is
that is
saves money,
so
we do not
have to
buy
the
books
we need on the phone.

On the other hand
, the disadvantage of e-books is that if we read
books
on the phone
of course
it is
bad
for our health,
especially
for our eyes. Another downside is that when we read a
books
on the phone, it
distract
us and
we waste
a lot of
our precious time.

Taking everything into consideration
just
as there are two sides to a coin, there are
good
and
bad
sides to everything. In my opinion although e-books
heve
their disadvantages, they have
many
advantages
.
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IELTS essay As e-book develops, newspapers reading is declining

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
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