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Nowadays not enough students choose science subjects in University in many countries.what are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects in the society?

Nowadays not enough students choose science subjects in University in many countries. what are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects in the society? VpgA
Since the dawn of the time science play an dispensable role for new discoveries in the universe which have proved as a boon for the human beings. apropos of the statement in myriad of countries least proportions of learner select science stream in their tertiary education due to several causes, will be contemplated in forthcoming paragraphs along with its consequences on the community. To start with causes, lack of interest, it is always seen that some students show the least interest in it because, pupils found it as a tough subject as science stream demand more brain storming and capabilities to deeply understand it's theories. Thus learner attracts towards the other easier subjects rather the science field. What's more, expensive stream, in universities expenditure of the science field such as fees, books and practical items are more expensive than other fields, which are unaffordable for the students who belong to underprivileged classes. To illustrate a recent survey has detailed that 80, % of students don't choose the science subject in University due to higher amount of cost which is out of reach of their parents. Reffering to the impacts, as science has given logic and reasoning to the society, if students will continue their ignorance towards this subject then, there will be disparity of researchers as a result it will act as a halt in the way of new innovation that is necessary in very field such as medical science. space science and many more. in short, due to this people will face lack of knowledge, may be they become superstitious in the absence of new discoveries. To conclude, it can be said that although science is a costly and tough subject, but, it's importance could not be overlooked because because the absence of science there will not be any innovation in every aspect of the society.
Since the dawn of the time
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dispensable role for new discoveries in the universe which have proved as a boon for the human beings.
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apropos
of the statement in myriad of countries
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least
proportions of learner select
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science
stream in their tertiary education due to several causes, will
be contemplated
in forthcoming paragraphs along with its consequences on the community. To
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start
with causes, lack of interest, it is always
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seen
that
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some
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students
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show
the least interest in it
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because
, pupils found it as a tough
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subject
as
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science
stream demand more brain storming and capabilities to
deeply
understand
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it's
theories.
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Thus
learner attracts towards the other easier
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subjects
rather
the
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science
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field
. What's more, expensive stream, in universities expenditure of the
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science
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field
such as fees, books and practical items are more expensive than other
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fields
, which are unaffordable for the
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students
who belong to underprivileged classes. To illustrate a recent survey has detailed that 80, % of
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students
don't choose the
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science
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subject
in University due to higher amount of cost which is out of reach of their parents.
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Reffering
to the impacts, as
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science
has
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given
logic and reasoning to the society, if
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students
will continue their ignorance towards this
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subject
then, there will be disparity of researchers
as a result
it will act as a halt in the way of new innovation
that is
necessary in
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very
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field
such as medical
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science
.
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space
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many
more.
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in
short, due to this
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people
will face lack of knowledge,
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may be
they become superstitious in the absence of new discoveries.
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, it can
be said
that although
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science
is a costly and tough
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subject
,
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but
, it's importance could not
be overlooked
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because
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because
the absence of
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science
there will not be any innovation in every aspect of the society.
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IELTS essay Nowadays not enough students choose science subjects in University in many countries. what are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects in the society?

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