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Nowadays,more and more people are using telephones for different purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of them?

Nowadays, more and more people are using telephones for different purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of them? 3a0jm
Recently, the phone is a great invetetion of scientists, with a large of benefits to human society. Communication gets more easily and convinien to world individuals. There are some advantages of bringing this invention. Nowadays, telephone has small texture, little weight and there is no wire as one can easily keep on the pocket on. Researching has showed using phones to emergency, as to a police, an ambulance, or fire emergency has became too easy. Students are able to call their parents to state emergency. To do online shopping, banking works and research for studying has became comfortable, mainly for disables and pensioners, only one finger touching easily do huge extra activities. Other humans think, using number of mobile phones district eye view, bright screen of laptop injure nervous system and also, therefore as a skin concern disease due to not knowing the limit using them. The individuals waste time not paying attention real events that happening around them. Number of drivers have been died due to using phones while driving a car, it has been cause of road accident. To sum up, although using phones has negative aspects, it is a huge invetetion has numerous benefits to human life as get it easier and useful. Due to knowing the limits for using them, prevent number of harms in person's life.
Recently, the
phone
is a great
invetetion
of scientists, with a large of benefits to human society. Communication
gets
more
easily
and
convinien
to world individuals. There are
some
advantages of bringing this invention. Nowadays, telephone has
small
texture,
little
weight and there is no wire as one can
easily
keep
on the pocket on. Researching has
showed
using
phones
to emergency, as to a police, an ambulance, or fire emergency has
became
too easy. Students are able to call their parents to state emergency. To do online shopping, banking works and research for studying has
became
comfortable,
mainly
for disables and pensioners,
only
one finger touching
easily
do huge extra activities. Other humans
think
, using number of mobile
phones
district eye view, bright screen of laptop injure nervous system and
also
,
therefore
as a skin concern disease due to not knowing the limit using them. The individuals waste time not paying attention real
events
that happening around them. Number of drivers have been
died
due to using
phones
while driving a car, it has been cause of road accident. To sum up, although using
phones
has
negative
aspects, it is a huge
invetetion
has numerous benefits to human life as
get
it easier and useful. Due to knowing the limits for using them,
prevent
number of harms in person's life.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, more and more people are using telephones for different purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of them?

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