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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? PB7w
These days many people make their company, rather than to work for a firm or organisation. In this case, it has some advantage and disadvantage. So, today I would like to talk about the pros and cons of self-employed, and my opinion. Let us talk about the benefits of self-employed. First, when you start your business, you can do as you like, For instance, when you work in another company, you limit to go to work and leave work. However, when you begin the self-employed, not only you can control your go to work and leave work but also, you are able to regulate your annual pay, any choice, and management. In addition, when you do self-employed, you are free. I mean, you can set a schedule your mind, also you
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
130 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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