Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? 0Anq3
Food is one of the fundamental needs of human lives, and from the ancient period until this ultra-modern tech-time people have invented different ways to prepare and customise foods. The improvement has definitely enhanced our lifestyle as we have more time to do more productive things. To begin with, the customs and ways people prepare foods and present to others vary depending on the race, culture and country. But the most fundamental need of preparing foods is to fulfil the very basic human need- hunger. Preparing foods was very cumbersome in the past but with the advancement of human knowledge and technology, men have created many devices and made many new ways of easily making foods. The number of restaurants and fast-food shops are ever-increasing and that have omitted the need to prepare the food at all. The advanced technology like a rice cooker, meal cooker and easy availability of ingredients nowadays help people to prepare food in no time and that has improved the way of people’s lifestyle. People now spend less time preparing foods and can utilise this time in other tasks like professional tasks, reading, entertainment and spending time with family and friends. Thus people get more productive and social because of the increased time they have. Quick food has become very popular which omits the needs of cooking and professionals, students and business person are having those foods during their lunchtime. This is a significant improvement in saving time and using it more productively. Though fast foods have some health issues, the ever-increasing popularity of it shows needs to have more time in our busy life and saving this time from the allotted time from cooking. The cooking machines help the housewives to prepare the foods easily and they do not have to spend time in a hot kitchen to prepare food. This is a leap towards a modern life where foods can be prepared virtually anywhere and in a few minutes. In summary, the improved way of cooking helps people nowadays to save time and cook in a more convenient place. This helps them to spend time on more important things and lead a life without much hassle.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Food
is one of the fundamental
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
needs
of human
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
, and from the ancient period until this ultra-modern tech-time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
have invented
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ways
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prepare
and
Possible spelling mistake. 'customise' is British English.
customise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
. The improvement has definitely enhanced our lifestyle as we have more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to do more productive things.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, the customs and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ways
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prepare
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
and present to others vary depending on the race, culture and country.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the most fundamental
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
of preparing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
is to fulfil the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
basic human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need-
hunger. Preparing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
cumbersome in the past
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
with the advancement of human knowledge and technology,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
have created
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
devices and made
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ways
of
easily
making
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
. The number of restaurants and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
-food shops are ever-increasing and that have omitted the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prepare
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
at all. The advanced technology like a rice cooker, meal cooker and easy availability of ingredients nowadays
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prepare
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
in no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and that has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
way
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people’s
lifestyle.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
spend less
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
preparing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
and can
Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.
utilise
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
in other tasks like professional tasks, reading, entertainment and spending
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
with family and friends.
Thus
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more productive and social
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the increased
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
they have.

Quick
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
has become
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
popular which omits the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
needs
of cooking and professionals, students and business person are having those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
during their lunchtime. This is a significant improvement in saving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and using it more
productively
. Though
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
health issues, the ever-increasing popularity of it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
needs
to have more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
in our busy life and saving this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
from the allotted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
from cooking. The cooking machines
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
the housewives to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prepare
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
easily and
they do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
spend
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
in a hot kitchen to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prepare
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. This is a leap towards a modern life where
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
can
be prepared
virtually
anywhere and in a few minutes.

In summary, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
way
of cooking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
helps
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
nowadays to save
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and cook in a more convenient place. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
helps
them to spend
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
on more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
things and lead a life without much hassle.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
363 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts