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Now lhe mochine is very complex, ond o lot of difficult work is outomoled. Does fhis mochine oulomolion hove more pros lhon cons?

Now lhe mochine is very complex, ond o lot of difficult work is outomoled. Does fhis mochine oulomolion hove more pros lhon cons? y7grl
Modern technology has equipped us with machines, which are working like robots. There are positive and negative effects of these machines on the individual and the society, which I shall highlight in this essay. Overall the pros outweigh the cons. On the positive side, machines are faster, more convenient and energy saving. Households and industries are much facilitated with machines. Personal use of machines gives people more free time to spend with family and pursue hobbies. Likewise, industrial use of machines reduces manpower for work and increases output. ln the words of Oscar Wilde - "On mechanical slavery, on the slavery of the machine, the future of the world depends. " Moreover, computer machines or robots manage our banks and even the tickets at the airport are issued by machine-robot. The computerization certainly relieves human beings from dull repetitive task without any human error. What is more, robotic surgery is being done to overcome the limitation of human beings such as trembling of human hands. Microscopic surgeries and eye operations can be better done with the help of robotic surgeons. On the negative side, machines reduce the need of manual work, which can lead to unemployment especially in the developing countries. What is more, insufficient knowledge of machine handling and operating is detrimental to uneducated workers and they end up getting injuries or disabilities while working with machines. Technical failures can also disturb the whole working system and lead to losses. Other negative effects of machines are on the health of individuals, especially the housewives who rely heavily on machines for the household chores. Machines are a failure where creative work is required. For example, machines cannot reproduce the unique and original work done by many artisans. lt has been rightly said that a machine can do the work of a thousand ordinary men, but no machine can do the work of one extraordinary man. Overall, the positive effects of machines outweigh the negative effects on the individual and society. However, in developing countries, in order to meet the employment needs of the population, a balance has to be maintained between manual work and mechanization.
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, which are working like robots. There are
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and

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negative
effects of these
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machines
on the individual and the society, which I shall highlight in this essay.

Overall
the pros outweigh the cons.

On the
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positive
side,
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machines
are faster, more convenient and energy saving. Households and industries

are much facilitated with
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machines
. Personal
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use
of
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machines
gives
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people
more free time to spend with

family and pursue hobbies.
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use
of
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machines
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reduces
manpower for
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work
and increases

output.
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the words of Oscar Wilde
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On mechanical slavery, on the slavery of the
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machine
, the future of

the world depends.
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"


Moreover
, computer
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machines
or robots manage our banks and even the tickets at the airport
are issued


by machine-robot. The computerization
certainly
relieves
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human
beings from dull repetitive task without

any
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human
error.
What is more
, robotic surgery is
being done
to overcome the limitation of
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human
beings

such as trembling of
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human
hands. Microscopic surgeries and eye operations can be better done with the

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help
of robotic surgeons.

On the
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negative
side,
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machines
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reduce
the need of manual
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work
, which can lead to unemployment

especially
in the
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developing countries
.
What is more
, insufficient knowledge of
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machine
handling and

operating is detrimental to uneducated
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workers and
they
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end
up getting injuries or disabilities while

working with
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. Technical failures can
also
disturb the whole working system and lead to losses.

Other
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negative
effects of
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machines
are on the health of individuals,
especially
the housewives who rely

heavily
on
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machines
for the household chores.
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Machines
are a failure where creative
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work
is required
. For

example,
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machines
cannot reproduce the unique and original
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work
done by
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many
artisans.
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lt
has been

rightly
said that a
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machine
can do the
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work
of a thousand ordinary
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men
,
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but
no
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machine
can do the work

of one extraordinary
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man
.

Overall
, the
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positive
effects of
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machines
outweigh the
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negative
effects on the individual and society.

However
, in
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developing countries
, in order to
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meet
the employment needs of the population, a balance

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has to
be maintained
between manual
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work
and mechanization.
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IELTS essay Now lhe mochine is very complex, ond o lot of difficult work is outomoled. Does fhis mochine oulomolion hove more pros lhon cons?

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355 words
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