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Now a days, universities are not accepting male and female students for every subject. The number of male students in science and research is high comparatively female. While number of social subject’s graduate are more females. We have been facing this dilemma for many years due to outdated education system. However, it can be improved with the modern education system. Every subject has its own pros and cons which can be elaborated as follows to elucidate the topic. Firstly, university graduates’ students with degrees in science and research are dominated to males. Simultaneously, specialized in economic and social field are influenced by females. In spite of, adopting a modernized system in education, Universities follow an outdated education system which does not support an equality basis. In the result, men graduates are leading the industry of science, engineer, research, development in the science and technology inventions are reduced 60% in UK than 10 years before. Social and

Now a days, universities are not accepting male and female students for every subject. The number of male students in science and research is high comparatively female. While number of social subject’s graduate are more females. We have been facing this dilemma for many years due to outdated education system. However, it can be improved with the modern education system. Every subject has its own pros and cons which can be elaborated as follows to elucidate the topic. Firstly, university graduates’ students with degrees in science and research are dominated to males. Simultaneously, specialized in economic and social field are influenced by females. In spite of, adopting a modernized system in education, Universities follow an outdated education system which does not support an equality basis. In the result, men graduates are leading the industry of science, engineer, research, development in the science and technology inventions are reduced 60% in UK than 10 years before. Social and 7MW2

Now a days, universities are not accepting male and female students for every subject. The number of male students in science and research are high comparatively female. While number of social subject’s graduate are more females. We have been facing this dilemma for many years due to outdated education system. However, it can be improved with the modern education system. Every subject has its own pros and cons which can be elaborated as follows to elucidate the topic. Firstly, university graduates’ students with degree of science and research are dominated to males. Simultaneously, specialized in economic and social field are influenced by females. In spite of, adopting a modernized system in the education, Universities follows an outdated education system which does not support an equality basis. In the result, men graduates are leading the industry of science, engineer, research, development in the science and technology inventions are reduced 60% in UK than 10 years before. Social and Economic industry deliberately at low stage due untalented and unenthusiastic student of this field. There are a plethora of suggestions and options to solve this issue. Universities and Government bodies can take steps to the modernized and advance education system. At the same time, students should encourage with same interest to choose their subjects. A student selects his subject forcefully due to the non-availability of seats, cannot produce outstanding and generous outcome at the end of day. Sum up, I strongly outweigh my opinion in the support of number of students should be selected on equal basis for each subject. To adopt the modern and updated system can support a nation or country to meet the challenges of this advanced technology era. As this impact will last the whole life of students. After getting an education in the unwilling subject, person able to produce outstanding is minimized

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