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Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed? PJdX
In modern day, it has been prevalent for modern people having an independent job instead of working as an employee in business firm. Firstly, as our world is increasingly becoming more modern due to the fact that the growth of advanced technology can not be prevented, then it is eventually inevitable to see a large number of people more attracted having a free job, because it provides every person equal opportunity setting up their own business idea and gives them the sense of freedom as well. It this context, free from every association rules or binds that would limit their own creativity. Moreover, as technology has taken off its ground in this day and age as one of the most critical part of everyone's lives then every person can develop their working project only by using it. For example, the advent of social media or online broadcast videos such as youtube, has drawn the attention of a large number of young people or even fresh graduate to build their own platform, owing to the fact that there are plethora of people who are successful of using this new development. Consequently, people would definitely choose the present-day job opportunity instead of the conservative ones. Secondly, working as a freelance without autoritative firms that bind them, has certainly its own drawbacks. Free workers seem to have unlimited freedom of choosing which type of job they want to do. Unfortunately, they don't have specific goals at which they have to achieve. And if any unexpecte events happened, they would not endure difficult conditions. For instance, economic crisis would actually affect various type of business but independent workers would suffer the most from such crisis because they had lost their regular consumers. To conclude, it doesn't really matter being independent employee as long as we also have the experience working in an established company so that we can endure during surreal periods.
In modern day, it has been prevalent for modern
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people
having an independent
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job
instead
of
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working
as an employee in business firm.

Firstly
, as our world is
increasingly
becoming more modern due to the fact that the growth of advanced technology can not be
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prevented
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eventually
inevitable to
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a large number of
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more attracted having a free
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job
,
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because
it provides every person equal opportunity setting up their
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own
business
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idea
and gives them the sense of freedom
as well
. It this context, free from every association
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rules
or binds that would limit their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
creativity.
Moreover
, as technology has taken off its ground in this day and age as one of the most critical part of everyone's
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lives
then every person can develop their
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working
project
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only
by using it.
For example
, the advent of social media or online broadcast videos such as
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youtube
, has drawn the attention of
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a large number of
young
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people
or even fresh graduate to build their
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own
platform, owing to the fact that there are plethora of
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people
who are successful of using this new development.
Consequently
,
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people
would definitely choose the present-day
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job
opportunity
instead
of the conservative ones.

Secondly
,
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working
as a freelance without
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autoritative
firms that bind them, has
certainly
its
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own
drawbacks. Free workers seem to have unlimited freedom of choosing which type of
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job
they want to do. Unfortunately, they don't have specific goals at which they
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have to
achieve. And if any
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unexpecte
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events
happened, they would not endure difficult conditions.
For instance
, economic crisis would actually affect various type of business
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but
independent workers would suffer the most from such crisis
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because
they had lost their regular consumers.

To conclude
, it doesn't
really
matter being independent employee as long as we
also
have the experience
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working
in an established
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
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so
that we can endure during surreal periods.
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IELTS essay Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

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4 paragraphs
318 words
6.0
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