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Name of patient: Jonh. Next two days He will be 18 years old. He lives at 137 PVD st district 9. He has just eaten a hard cookied, and then he realises that his mandibular first incisor is cracked. He feels too bad. Next week, he will back to school so he wants to be treated now. His mother will take him nearly 30 minutes to our clinic. The doctor recomments he should keep his tooth clean, and wash his mount with mouthwash. And the doctor suggest that he should fills it with composite material.

Name of patient: Possible spelling mistake found.JohnJonJoshJonahJoniJon h
Jonh
. Next
 two days He will be 18 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 at 137 PVD st district 9. He has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 eaten a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
Possible spelling mistake found.cookedcookiecookies
cookied
, and then he Possible spelling mistake. 'realises' is British English.realizes
realises
 that his mandibular first
 incisor is cracked
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
He
 feels too This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
. Next
 week, he will back to school This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 he wants to be treated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. His mother will take him nearly
 30 minutes to our clinic. The doctor Possible spelling mistake found.recommends
recomments
 he should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 his tooth clean, and wash his mount with mouthwash. And the doctor suggest that he should The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "fill"fill
fills
 it with composite material. 