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News media is important in our society. Why it is so important. Do you think its influence is generally positive or negative.

Media is the greatest weapon in the armory of the modern commander. News media plays an essential role in everyone's life. Personally, I corroborate that it on the contrary beneficial and adverse effect. Let us deliberate the compelling reasons which will lead towards a reasonable inference. There are plethora of beneficial reasons to shore light upon the given proclivity. To plunge into, the most intrinsic one is the information and knowledge. To justify, news media provide ins and outs of the universe such as current affairs, events and a number of more. It gives abundance knowledge about various types of culture and lifestyle. News media conducted surveys such as vote cast, beneficial or adverse of the various things like crime, obesity and consequently on. For instance, in 2022, the election will be conducted in the Punjab and other states, on the contrary news media revealed that Congress would get high percentage of votes. As a result, with the help of news media people gain enhanced knowledge. On the other hand, there are a number of adverse of the given notion. Nowadays, new media focus on the personal things of the celebrities and other sport stars and after that these types of news are viral on channel. To exemplify, due to Corona virus pandemic time there are lot of news which was telecast on the television. In AAP news channel showed that amitabh bachman had dinner at 9 pm.
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Media
is the greatest weapon in the armory of the modern commander.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
News
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
plays an essential role in everyone's life.
Personally
, I corroborate that it
on the contrary
beneficial and adverse effect.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
us deliberate the compelling reasons which will lead towards a reasonable inference. There are plethora of beneficial reasons to shore light upon the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
proclivity. To plunge into, the most intrinsic one is the information and knowledge. To justify,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
provide ins and outs of the universe such as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
affairs,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
and a number of more. It gives abundance knowledge about various types of culture and lifestyle.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
News
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
conducted surveys such as vote cast, beneficial or adverse of the various things like crime, obesity and
consequently
on.
For instance
, in 2022, the election will
be conducted
in the Punjab and other states,
on the contrary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
revealed that Congress would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
high percentage of votes.
As a result
, with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
gain enhanced knowledge.

On the other hand
, there are a number of adverse of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
notion. Nowadays,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
focus on the personal things of the celebrities and other sport stars and after that these types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
are viral on channel. To exemplify, due to Corona virus pandemic time there are lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
which was telecast on the television. In AAP
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
channel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
that amitabh bachman had dinner at 9 pm.
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IELTS essay News media is important in our society. Why it is so important. Do you think its influence is generally positive or negative.

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