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News media influenced people's lives in negative way

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Present Era is a era where the world is depend on the news media to know current affairs that take place around the Creations. Certain individuals believe that these days news. com bring some kind of negative impact as they are away from their fundamental duties. I completely agree to the statement as the focus more towards benefits rather than their duties. It is true that both printed and vision media plays an important role in every individual life. Because people always want to know about the incident happened around the world but now a days this media turned out to be profit oriented business and they pay more attention towards increasing their viewership. Moreover they implement different strategies which in result increase their net earning and increase subscribers.

Present Era is Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 era where the world is Consider using a past participle here: "depended".depended
depend
 on the news media to know This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 affairs that take place around the Creations. Certain individuals believe that these Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "days'" or "day's"?days'day's
days
 news. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com
 bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 kind of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact as they are away from their fundamental duties. I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 to the statement as the focus more towards benefits rather
 than their duties. It is true that both printed and vision media plays an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role in every individual life. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 always want to know about the incident happened around the world This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Did you mean "nowadays"?nowadays
now a days
 this media turned out to be profit oriented Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).business, and
business and
 they pay more attention towards increasing their viewership. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 they implement This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 strategies which in result increase their net earning and increase subscribers. 