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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages? b57g
Many are intrigued about the ubiquity of multinational businesses in underdeveloped Nations and whether this path acts as a precursor or not. I personally do believe this will catalyze a breakthrough in these countries. Firstly, we should consider the possible boon of such holdings, take proliferation of job vacancies for instance that will be followed by an abduction in unemployment obviously, which implement a relentless stream of cash in people's accounts. Plus, employers from different backgrounds working as a team triggers a penchant in cultural exchange which is rated the foremost reason for tourists’ transportation amid countries. This is shown in augmentation in travelling rate between Middle Eastern countries and China, which appears to move in tandem with economic growth as well. Furthermore, in case of triumph these companies will become a potential opponent for their counterparts in developed societies. Therefore, this situation will open a venue for their global reputation. After all, emerging of the transnational firms is said to be a positive approach to fulfill a country's dream for development. On the contrary, there are undeniable downsides of multicultural corporations. To name one, the laws are established according to each country's legislation thus there might be various perplexing that have not been encountered before. For example, some countries are victims of boycotts and have restriction in global trading, which may mitigate or even prevent the future entrepreneurs and business owners to show interest in investment. Moreover, struggling with language concepts is proven to be a barrier and a major cause of difficulties; Fraud, in relation with misunderstanding is an example. These seemingly benign phenomena will hinder relationships among Nations. To recapitulate, albeit the pros are accentuated in this essay, we cannot be blind to its cons. Today many specialists are presenting actionable steps that accommodate the developing realms’ needs for success.
Many
are intrigued
about the ubiquity of multinational businesses in underdeveloped Nations and whether this path acts as a precursor or not. I
personally
do believe this will catalyze a breakthrough in these countries.

Firstly
, we should consider the possible boon of such holdings, take proliferation of job vacancies
for instance
that will
be followed
by an abduction in unemployment
obviously
, which implement a relentless stream of cash in
people
's accounts. Plus, employers from
different
backgrounds working as a team triggers a penchant in cultural exchange which
is rated
the foremost reason for tourists’ transportation amid countries. This
is shown
in augmentation in travelling rate between Middle Eastern countries and China, which appears to
move
in tandem with economic growth
as well
.
Furthermore
, in case of triumph these
companies
will become a potential opponent for their counterparts in developed societies.
Therefore
, this situation will open a venue for their global reputation.
After all
, emerging of the transnational firms
is said
to be a
positive
approach to fulfill a country's dream for development.

On the contrary
, there are undeniable downsides of multicultural corporations. To name one, the laws
are established
according to each country's legislation
thus
there might be various perplexing that have not
been encountered
before
.
For example
,
some
countries are victims of boycotts and have restriction in global trading, which may mitigate or even
prevent
the future entrepreneurs and business owners to
show
interest in investment.
Moreover
, struggling with language concepts
is proven
to be a barrier and a major cause of difficulties; Fraud, in relation with misunderstanding is an example. These
seemingly
benign phenomena will hinder relationships among Nations.

To recapitulate, albeit the pros
are accentuated
in this essay, we cannot be blind to its cons.
Today
many
specialists are presenting actionable steps that accommodate the developing realms’ needs for success.
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IELTS essay Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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