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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.

Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. m19bK

The environment is an essential part of mankind on earth. A large group of persons does not show much concern about environmental problems. I will agree on this, will discuss on the same at the end I will conclude. To begin with, A huge number of people do not worry about the nature they are living in. Every day they pollute the environment in or another ways like using plastic which will degrade in the earth even after 500 years due to this they are polluting soil, also because of smoke that produced from vehicles, they are polluting air, which directly effecting the ozone layer and producing hazardous Ultra voilet rays on to the earth. Furthermore water pollution is happening due to the release of harmfull waste discharge from companies, this not only contaminating the water also affecting the other water species which are living in the ocean. Public does not caring about the future generations they are seeking for their luxury and consuming the naturals resources than needed for them, not only consuming they are spoiling them, because of that next coming generations has to pay for current mistakes. For instances, because of ancestors wrong decisions, present generations are not getting pure water, we are in a situation to purchase drinking water. Now a days some set of groups conducting awarenss programs to save the nature from these harmfull pollutions, but the definetly will not sufficient to gaurd the nature, in addition youth volunteeres have to come forward and do many public enlight programs on the atmosphere. To sum up, In my view Nevertheless, Its everybody's responsiblily to protect the universe and also Government has to take much actions on individuals or firms, whoever goes beyond the rules.

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 I will conclude.

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 with, A huge number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 pollution is happening due to the release of Possible spelling mistake found.harmfulharmfullyharm fullharmful l
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 contaminating the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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 affecting the other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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purchase
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 a days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 set of groups conducting Possible spelling mistake found.awareness
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 programs to save the nature from these Possible spelling mistake found.harmfulharmfullyharm fullharmful l
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 pollutions, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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definetly
 will not sufficient to Possible spelling mistake found.guardgourd
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 the nature, in addition
 youth Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "volunteers", the plural form of the noun 'volunteer'?volunteersvolunteeredvolunteer es
volunteeres
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 programs on the atmosphere.

To sum up, In my view Nevertheless
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responsiblily
 to protect the universe and also
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Government
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has to
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much
 actions on individuals or firms, whoever goes beyond the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
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