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Most of the people find pets to be a brilliant company for their descendants.

Most of the people find pets to be a brilliant company for their descendants. However, some of the population in the society consider it threatening and ailing. This essay will elaborately discuss on its pros and cons in detail. Keeping animals as pets can be appealing. It is good to have pet at home where there are kids as they act as an affable companion for the growing young ones. It rather feels good to come back home, exhausted but relish after playing with the apple of our eye. They get adjusted with us in quite some time. . Their companionship provides stress relief for humans. However, in my opinion, I say no to having pets at home. And the reason behind it is contemplative. Its a bitter pill to accept the fact. Nonetheless, animals are built for life in their natural habitat. When there are cats, dogs, hamsters, fish, and other animals under our care, calling them “fur babies” does change the fact that the animals are not free to roam about as they please. We place restrictions on their movement, sometimes not even allowing them to be outside, because there are fears for their safety. You might have the most beautiful home ever constructed in the history of humanity, but keeping a pet inside means that all they have is a beautiful jail. Should we be domesticating animals for companionship? Is it ethical to train animals to be of service to us instead of allowing them to pursue their natural instincts? are the questions one should ask themselves. For instance, I experienced one of my acquaintance not allowing her dog to hook up with the other dogs for its sexual pleasure which is her natural asset that it has to look after but calls it to be her daughter. Nevertheless, she has own one for her. I don't find it relevant to change nature to a counterfeit and unreal world just for human pleasure. Trying to tame even animals to accommodate them into human world. What if we once think vise versa and lead animal's life? In conclusion, I would rather say that its inhuman to keep pet as your companion. And try to become a good ally for your offspring so that the mankind is always eternalize. I am aware of the fact that it happens only when the pigs fly. However, I go with the saying where there's a will, there's a way too.
Most of the
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people
find
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pets
to be a brilliant
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company
for their descendants.
However
,
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some of the
population in the society consider it threatening and ailing. This essay will
elaborately
discuss on its pros and cons in detail.

Keeping
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animals
as
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pets
can be appealing. It is
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good
to have pet at home where there are kids as they act as an affable companion for the growing young ones. It
rather
feels
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good
to
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come
back home, exhausted
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but
relish after playing with the apple of our eye. They
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get
adjusted with us in quite
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some
time.
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.
Their companionship provides
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stress
relief for humans.

However
, in my opinion, I say no to having
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pets
at home. And the reason behind it is contemplative.
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Its
a bitter pill to accept the fact. Nonetheless,
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animals
are built
for life in their natural habitat. When there are cats, dogs, hamsters, fish, and other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
under our care, calling them “fur babies” does
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change
the fact that the
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animals
are not free to roam about as they
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please
. We place restrictions on their movement,
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sometimes
not even allowing them to be outside,
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because
there are fears for their safety. You might have the most
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beautiful
home ever constructed in the history of humanity,
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but
keeping a pet inside means that all they have is a
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beautiful
jail. Should we be domesticating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
for companionship? Is it ethical to train
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animals
to be of service to us
instead
of allowing them to pursue their natural instincts?
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are
the questions one should ask themselves.
For instance
, I experienced one of my acquaintance not allowing her dog to hook up with the other dogs for its sexual pleasure which is her natural asset that it
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has to
look after
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but
calls it to be her daughter.
Nevertheless
, she has
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own
one for her. I don't find it relevant to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
nature to a counterfeit and unreal world
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just
for human pleasure. Trying to tame even
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
to accommodate them into human world. What if we once
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
vise versa and lead animal's life?

In conclusion
, I would
rather
say that
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its
inhuman to
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keep
pet as your companion. And try to become a
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good
ally for your offspring
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so
that the mankind is always eternalize. I am aware of the fact that it happens
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only
when the pigs
fly
.
However
, I
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go with
the saying where there's a will, there's a way too.
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IELTS essay Most of the people find pets to be a brilliant company for their descendants.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
408 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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