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More and more people want own popular branded clothes , cars and other items .what is the reason behind this . its a negative or positive change .

More and more people want own popular branded clothes, cars and other items. what is the reason behind this. its a negative or positive change. 0ABB3

In this era of globalisation and modernization, masses give preference to purchase branded dresses, automobiles and anyother products. change is the law of nature and every change brings with some pros and cons. I utterly believe its a negative change and development. Reasons behind this change would be discussed in the subsequent sections of the essay. To commence with, individual give preference to purchase eminent clothes, footwear and vehicle and other things. people expenditure on these because of availability of online shopping, humans purchase product from any country via phone and laptop. To exemplify, my college bought Nike shoes from London through online shopping. They face huge financial burden on them. people branded things only to outshine others. On the other hand, humans go far from their tradition. They forget their values. people feel equality in society and it enhance their confidence after wear branded clothes. To illustrate, a statics recently conducted indicate that, 80 ℅ people from nations go to other countries. Most of Indians go to foreign countries and give preference to wear western clothes. They feel comfortable and it helps to familiar with cosmopolitan culture. To recapitulate, I firmly believe that people forget their tradition and culture through buying popular clothes and their tradition values reduced. people needs to avoide that

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purchase
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anyother
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change
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some
 pros and cons. I utterly
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negative
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change
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 would be discussed
 in the subsequent sections of the essay.

To commence with, individual give preference to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 eminent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwardrobegarbregaliaattiresportswear
clothes
, footwear and vehicle and other things. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeople
people
 expenditure on these This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of availability of online shopping, humans This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 product from any country via phone and laptop. To exemplify, my college This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 Nike shoes from London through online shopping. They face huge financial burden on them. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeople
people
 branded things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 to outshine others.

On the other hand
, humans go far from their tradition. They forget their values. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeople
people
 feel equality in society and it Did you mean "enhances"?enhances
enhance
 their confidence after wear branded You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwardrobegarbregaliaattiresportswear
clothes
. To illustrate, a statics recently conducted indicate that, 80 ℅ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 from nations go to other countries. Consider using "Most Indians" or "Most of the Indians".Most IndiansMost of the Indians
Most of Indians
 go to foreign countries and give preference to wear western You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwardrobegarbregaliaattiresportswear
clothes
. They feel comfortable and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to familiar with cosmopolitan culture.

To recapitulate, I firmly
 believe that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 forget their tradition and culture through buying popular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwardrobegarbregaliaattiresportswear
clothes
 and their tradition values This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeople
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.need
needs
 to Possible spelling mistake found.avoidavoidedavoidsavoid e
avoide
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthat.that!that?that:that,that;
that