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more and more people in developing countries are purchasing tar for the first time give the problem and solution.

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People are buying car for the first time, a number are increasing in growing Nation. the leading problem is that, in these situation rise the number of accidents. to address this issue the government motivate their public to use public transport. The principal problem is that expansion of accident in the country and it can also create a massive traffic issue. Moreover it can spread pollution. most of individual do not have enough driving experience, they are learning how to drive a car. Although personal car can help to travel, however they also cause of accident and increment that death rate. the carbon dioxide and methane has being produced by fuel car so they can make breathing issue. For example, USA's environmental council service stated that, fuel car has the reason of 23% of air pollution.

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, USA's environmental council service stated that, fuel You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
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