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I have no choice but to write in English

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I would be lying to say that I am no longer suicidal. it is really funny that you have to admit /deny having suicidal thoughts. Everyone should be entitled to his feelings However, it's a different story altogether if your psychiatrist discharges you, thus by his professional judgment you are Supposedly a normal person again, who by no means will contemplate suicide. I am one of such discharged people. When I first got the instructions from my psychiatrist, I told my close friends that I'll be off the medicine soon, albeit burying my worries and pessimistic outlook deep. They were happy for me. How I wish that their happiness will be heartfelt by myself well. I couldn't help but hate them secretly for not asking if I was ready for the discharge.
I would be lying to say that I am no longer

suicidal.
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it
is
really
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funny
that you
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have to
admit /deny having

suicidal thoughts. Everyone should
be entitled
to his feelings

However
, it's a
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different
story altogether if your psychiatrist

discharges you,
thus
by his professional judgment you are

Supposedly
a normal person again, who by no means will

contemplate suicide. I am one of such discharged
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people
.

When I
first
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got
the instructions from my psychiatrist, I
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told
my

close friends that I'll be off the medicine
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soon
, albeit burying my worries and pessimistic outlook deep. They were happy for me. How I wish that their happiness will be heartfelt by myself

well. I couldn't
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help
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but
hate them
secretly
for not asking if I was ready for the discharge.

IELTS essay I have no choice but to write in English

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132 words
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