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More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think are the cause of this? Can you suggest some possible solution?

More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think are the cause of this? Can you suggest some possible solution? QAxy
People have to work to make money for providing themselves with things they need. Every day number of people who believe that current job conditions are reasoning of stress. This essay will introduce with causes which may be toxic environment and overworking and possible solutions to these problems. In conclusion, the right attitude to work and mutual understanding among colleagues and directors is the best solution for not being under tension in the workplace
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. This essay will introduce with causes which may be toxic environment and overworking and possible solutions to these problems.

In conclusion
, the right attitude to work and mutual understanding among colleagues and directors is the best solution for not being under tension in the workplace

IELTS essay More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think are the cause of this? Can you suggest some possible solution?

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  American English
2 paragraphs
73 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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