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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? emrK
City life is the best accomodation for every person to find their own career with the hope of the better future. However, there are some obstacles when they migrate to the city for a living. This essay disscuss some of the challenges when they live in a large metropolises and how the government can improve a better urban life for all residents. One of the main problems that urban dwellers have to face off is the traffic congestion. Increasing unproductive travel time not only causes stress and tiredness, but also cause lowers work productivity.
City life is the best
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accomodation
for every person to find their
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own
career with the hope of the better future.
However
, there are
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some
obstacles when they migrate to the city for a living. This essay
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disscuss
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some of the
challenges when they
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live
in a large metropolises and how the
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government
can
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improve
a better urban life for all residents. One of the main problems that urban dwellers
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have to
face off is the traffic congestion. Increasing unproductive travel time not
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only
causes
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stress
and tiredness,
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but
also
cause lowers work productivity.

IELTS essay More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

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  American English
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