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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? emrK

City life is the best accomodation for every person to find their own career with the hope of the better future. However, there are some obstacles when they migrate to the city for a living. This essay disscuss some of the challenges when they live in a large metropolises and how the government can improve a better urban life for all residents. One of the main problems that urban dwellers have to face off is the traffic congestion. Increasing unproductive travel time not only causes stress and tiredness, but also cause lowers work productivity.

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 career with the hope of the better future. However
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 obstacles when they migrate to the city for a living. This essay Possible spelling mistake found.discuss
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some of the
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live
 in a large metropolises and how the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
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improve
 a better urban life for all residents. One of the main problems that urban dwellers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 face off is the traffic congestion. Increasing unproductive travel time not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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stress
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 cause lowers work productivity. 