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many university graduates cannot find job related to their chosen profession

many university graduates cannot find job related to their chosen profession QJdX

Finding a job in their chosen profession is one of the most problems of university graduates these day. One of the main causes of these problems is that the students are lack of experience on their chosen field, the employers are not recognizing the pupil who are lack of experience. It is hard for those students to face the realty waiting in the real world. Universities did not informed university graduates what are the possible problems that are waiting for them about finding employers or job after graduation. Students who have a lot of experience and expertise in their chosen field while studying have the advantage to survive finding an employment than for those students who are not competent in their chosen field.

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these day
. One of the main causes of these problems is that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 are lack of experience on their chosen field, the employers The verb 'recognizing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are not recognizing
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hard
 for those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 to face the realty waiting in the real world.

Universities did not The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "inform"inform
informed
 university graduates what are the possible problems that are waiting for them about finding employers or job after graduation. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
Students
 who have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 experience and expertise in their chosen field while studying have the advantage to survive finding an employment than for those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 who are not competent in their chosen field. 