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many university graduates cannot find job related to their chosen profession

many university graduates cannot find job related to their chosen profession 3oDX

Finding a job in their chosen profession is one of the most problems of university graduates these day. Some of the key factors to consider to solve these problems are First, the university must tie up to some employer by creating job fairs to prioritize fresh graduates students who are lack of experience, For instance, in the IT industry, they require university graduates to have one or more years of experience for them to hire. If the university do tie up to some prospective companies, the students can have a work related to their chosen fields rather than working on other field in order to get a job. Second, the companies must have available slot for those fresh graduates in their company. In conclusion, The best way for this problem to be resolved involved the government, higher educational institutions and possible employers to co-operate and work for a win-win solution for all parties involved

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