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many people think that technology creates significant impact in the modern word? Do you agree with this statement?

many people think that technology creates significant impact in the modern word? jRnxy
Nowadays technology creates a significant impact in the modern world. I strongly agree with this statement for several reasons. Firstly, the internet has brought new means of communication among people such as live chats and social media. This kind of technology could help people to connect with others and could improve their relationship as they could keep in touch and chat with each other. To cite an example, with the help of social media websites, I was able to found all my old friends from high school, thus, we were able to meet and have dinner all together. this happened thanks to the internet. Secondly, the network has brought enormous benefit for business and markets, as more and more people are selling goods online. By doing this, buyers can buy goods from all over the world and choose different companies in an easier and faster way than it was before. Moreover, as there are more companies in the market the prices will be lower than in a national market. In addition, the web gave to access to everyone to search for information and news in real-time. For these reasons, automation could save improve our lifestyle and also our health. For instance, the web allows doctors to operate patients remotely and this could save their lives. To sum up, governments must cooperate in order to research and improve our current technology, although, we should try to create even better technologies that could improve even more our lifestyle, health and our lives.
Nowadays
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creates a significant impact in the modern world. I
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agree
with this statement for several reasons.

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people
such as
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live
chats and social media. This kind of
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technology
could
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help
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people
to connect with others and could
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improve
their relationship as they could
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keep
in touch and chat with each other. To cite an example, with the
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help
of social media websites, I was able to found all my
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old
friends from high school,
thus
, we were able to
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meet
and have dinner all together.
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this
happened thanks to the internet.

Secondly
, the network has brought enormous benefit for business and markets, as more and more
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people
are selling
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goods
online. By doing this, buyers can
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buy
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goods
from all over the world and choose
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different
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companies
in an easier and faster way than it was
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before
.
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, as there are more
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companies
in the market the prices will be lower than in a national market.
In addition
, the web gave to access to everyone to search for information and news in real-time. For these reasons, automation could save
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improve
our lifestyle and
also
our health.
For instance
, the web
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allows
doctors to operate patients
remotely
and this could save their
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lives
.

To sum up,
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governments
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must
cooperate in order to research and
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improve
our
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current
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technology
, although, we should try to create even better
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technologies
that could
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improve
even more our lifestyle, health and our
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lives
.
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IELTS essay many people think that technology creates significant impact in the modern word?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
8
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