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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend? Ka1k

There is no doubt that these days risky activiteis are popular. some of peple think its good trial deserves to try. which I strongly agree with. In this essay I will discuss my opinion. In terms of consider it as a risky game, these activiteis have security tools which make the player safe. sometimes we hear accedients but its little comparing of what happens always, It will not effect on the games rabitation. Its worthy, The good feeling that comes from this new experience will makes you forget the fear of the trial. People who believe its dangerious, they will lose a lot of fun. Moreover, people tend to try new things. Especially teenagers. who love to show their capacitis and try to do new things. It would make them busy. because of Its challenging and unusuall. therefore, general benefits, the stuides shows that people who like adventures they have increased of their temper, health and immunity system to the best. In conclusion, perhaps risky activities would make life person in danger but its good to try and explore

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activiteis
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some
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peple
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think
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good
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which
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with. In this essay I will discuss my opinion.

In terms of consider it as a risky game, these Possible spelling mistake found.activities
activiteis
 have security tools which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
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sometimes
 we hear Possible spelling mistake found.accidents
accedients
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but
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little
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happens always
, It will not Did you mean "affect"?affect
effect
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rabitation
. Its worthy, The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 feeling that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 from this new experience will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "make"make
makes
 you forget the fear of the trial. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 who believe its Possible spelling mistake found.dangerous
dangerious
, they will lose This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 fun.

Moreover
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 tend to try new things. Especially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWho
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 their Possible spelling mistake found.capacities
capacitis
 and try to do new things. It would You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 them busy. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBecause
because
 of Its challenging and Possible spelling mistake found.unusualunusuallyunusual l
unusuall
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTherefore
therefore
, general benefits, the Possible spelling mistake found.studiesstridesstooges
stuides
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who like adventures they have increased of their temper, health and immunity system to the best.

In conclusion
, perhaps risky activities would You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 life person in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardrisk
danger
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but
 its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 to "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.try to
try and
 explore