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Many people feel that students should learn from online materials while others feel that it is better to use printed materials. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people feel that students should learn from online materials while others feel that it is better to use printed materials. RN5P8
Since the last decade with the boom in internet and digital media, the methodologies, students usefor learning is changing rapidly. At present, many students prefer to use online content for studying whereas more traditional students still use the printed materials. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the former view. Online content can easily be accessed via multiple devices like smartphones, computers, etc. So clearly, the accessibility of online materials is way more than printed formats like books, papers, etc. For instance, a student can easily access an ebook on his smartphone, which he usually carries with him and is way easier than carrying a book along with him. For this reason, I feel online materials provide more convenience and easier availability to students. Although the world is going digital, using printed materials for studying helps students focus on the task of learning and provides a distraction free environment for the same. Unlike printed formats of learning when a student is studying online they need to use a digital device to access the content and the same digital device can be used for many other purposes too. For example, when using a smart phone the student insteadof learning can start chatting which his friends on social media and waste his important time. So there is no doubt that printed materials provide a distraction learning experience. To conclude, like two sides of a coin, both learning formats have their pros and cons. Although online learning provides more accessibility and convenience, using printed materials is distraction free and allows students to focus on learning itself. In my opinion, the convenience and ease of useprovided by online learning outweighs its problems of distraction I think as we move forward in the 21st century, more and more students are going to be using online contentfor learning, compared to other formats.
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content for studying whereas more traditional
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. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and
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my support for the former view.

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easily
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via multiple devices like smartphones, computers, etc.
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So
clearly
, the accessibility of
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online
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materials
is way more than
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printed
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formats
like books, papers, etc.
For instance
, a
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student
can
easily
access an
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on his smartphone, which he
usually
carries with him and is way easier than carrying a book along with him.
For this reason
, I feel
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materials
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provide
more convenience and easier availability to students.

Although the world is going digital, using
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printed
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materials
for studying
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helps
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students
focus on the task of
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learning
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provides
a
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distraction
free environment for the same. Unlike
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formats
of
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when a
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is studying
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they need to
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a digital device to access the content and the same digital device can be
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used
for
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other purposes too.
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, when using a smart phone the
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insteadof
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learning
can
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chatting which his friends on social media and waste his
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important
time.
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there is no doubt that
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materials
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provide
a
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distraction
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learning
experience.

To conclude
, like two sides of a coin, both
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learning
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formats
have their pros and cons. Although
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online
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learning
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provides
more accessibility and convenience, using
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materials
is
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distraction
free and
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allows
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students
to focus on
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learning
itself. In my opinion, the convenience and
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by
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learning
outweighs its problems of
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distraction
I
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think
as we
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move
forward in the 21st century, more and more
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students
are going to be using
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contentfor
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learning
, compared to other
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formats
.
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IELTS essay Many people feel that students should learn from online materials while others feel that it is better to use printed materials.

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4 paragraphs
315 words
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