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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society

Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society P9XX
Social networking sites like Facebook, twitter have helped to promote globalization from communication standpoint. It is very easy to connect to people all around the world and helps to know various opinions on crucial topics. However there is a debate whether the negative aspects of such platforms outweigh the positives. I do not agree to this school of thought and will highlight why social networking is crucial and helpful in today's world for knowledge sharing and establishing a connect between people. While we have all kinds of print media and electronic media at our disposal for latest issues and news, youth today is more inclined towards accessing information on networking sites. Social media is a powerful tool to share different ideas and thoughts across the world and we have seen in the recent times how awareness about climate change, global warming is being raised via this medium. The more people get to know about, more steps governments across the world will have to work towards implemented policies around such issues. Hence social platforms can be very influential tools if used in a positive way. Nowadays people have utilized these platforms to establish connect with long lost friends and family members. People work in different parts of the world and it’s not always easy to go meet and socialize, these sites have helped bridge that gap. Along with socializing these platforms can be utilized if someone is looking to work or relocate overseas, there are various groups to guide with the steps and set of instructions and even prepare for various exams like IELTS, TOFEL etc. Although there are some negative aspects like addiction and promoting ideas which can be harmful to the society, yet if used appropriately these sites or platforms can be influential tools to socialize and discuss and raise awareness on relevant topics.
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helped
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easy to connect to
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people
all around the
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world
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helps
to know various opinions on crucial topics.
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there is a debate whether the
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negative
aspects of such
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platforms
outweigh the positives. I do not
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agree
to this school of
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thought
and will highlight why
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networking is crucial and helpful in
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today
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world
for knowledge sharing and establishing
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today
is more inclined towards accessing information on networking
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sites
.
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media is a powerful tool to share
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ideas
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in the recent times how awareness about climate
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change
, global warming is
being raised
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people
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governments
across the
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will
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have to
work towards implemented policies around such issues.
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can be
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very
influential tools if
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used
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positive
way.

Nowadays
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have utilized these
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to establish connect with
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long lost
friends and family members.
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work in
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parts of the
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world
and it’s not always easy to go
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meet
and socialize, these
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have
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helped
bridge that gap. Along with socializing these
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can
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if someone is looking to work or relocate overseas, there are various groups to guide with the steps and set of instructions and even prepare for various exams like IELTS,
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ideas
which can be harmful to the society,
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used
appropriately
these
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sites
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platforms
can be influential tools to socialize and discuss and raise awareness on relevant topics.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society

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4 paragraphs
305 words
5.5
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