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Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Although, many are of the notion that governing body should take part actively to carried out scientific reserches under their own supervision rather than any other private enterprizes. I think in a different manner and disagree to the given statement to a larger extent. My inclination is discussed in the ensuing paragraphs. Out of all the arguments, the strongest one to prove my point is that the private companies should give more attention to reserches as to achieve good annual turnover. In willing to earn more and more amount of money, private sectors would definately give their best to doing successful scientific reserches. For an instance, American based company spaceX is leading company who carried out reserches so well that even NASA also asked help from them in some project. Another point to prove my view is, scientific reserches carried out by private companies would never stopped because of lack of funds. By this I mean, government has a lot of work to handle and they also alloted some fix amount of money to the scientific reserches, because of that doing reserch is not possible sometimes. However, private company could arrange funds and put it into the reserches. It also boost the economical status of the respective country. On the contrary, I would not overlooked the other aspects too. Scientific reserches carried out by government could create job apportunities for the best scientist. Governing body offers job to the best scientist and it would also helpful for the reserch work. Thus, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that despite of just thinking about the job which offers by government, my reasoning emphasise that economical boost of country and growth of private organizations in science feild is rational.
Although
,
many
are of the notion that governing body should
take part
actively
to carried out
scientific
reserches
under their
own
supervision
rather
than any other
private
enterprizes
. I
think
in a
different
manner and disagree to the
given
statement to a larger extent. My inclination
is discussed
in the ensuing paragraphs.

Out of all the arguments, the strongest one to prove my point is that the
private
companies
should give more attention to
reserches
as to achieve
good
annual turnover. In willing to earn more and more amount of money,
private
sectors would
definately
give their best to doing successful
scientific
reserches
. For an instance, American based
company
spaceX
is leading
company
who carried out
reserches
so
well that even NASA
also
asked
help
from them in
some
project.

Another point to prove my view is,
scientific
reserches
carried out by
private
companies
would never
stopped
because
of lack of funds. By this I mean,
government
has
a lot of
work to
handle and
they
also
alloted
some
fix
amount of money to the
scientific
reserches
,
because
of that doing
reserch
is not possible
sometimes
.
However
,
private
company
could arrange funds and put it into the
reserches
. It
also
boost
the
economical
status of the respective country.

On the contrary
, I would not
overlooked
the other aspects too.
Scientific
reserches
carried out by
government
could create job
apportunities
for the best scientist. Governing body offers job to the best scientist and it would
also
helpful for the
reserch
work.

Thus
, to wrap up the discussion, it can
be said
that
despite of
just
thinking about the job which offers by
government
, my reasoning
emphasise
that economical boost of country and growth of
private
organizations in science
feild
is rational.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. with this opinion?

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