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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country ,what solutions can be taken to change negative attitude are the reasons and what

Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country, what solutions can be taken to change negative attitude are the reasons and what Kx19
In the current scenerio it is being witnessed that overwhelming number of people travel to international countries. Some people believe that overseas travelling is a negative impact for their own nation. This essays discusses the caused by global travelling and suggests some key remedies in the paragraphs below. One convincing reason is that why some people think that international tourism is a bad thing for their country because number of people went to international nations to spend their vaccations due to they forgave their culture and traditions, if they visited another country they wear clothes according to their culture. As, these types of clothes are totally different as compared to global tourism so that individuals get hurt the feeling of people those who lived in international countries. In order tackle this issues, there are various ways to declining this problem. First of all, it is the responsibility of government that they should make strict rules and regulations which will assist to control this problem. As a result, people have fear to doing any bad evil in another nation because individuals have no right to harm the culture of any nation. Apart from that, authorities should aware people and provide guidance and education to holiday maker which they spend holidays in global nations. For example, recently a news published in newspaper, "The Turbine "revealed that Organisations of international countries provide provisions to those people who lived in global nations to accommodate the waste material time to time, it helps to make the environment ecofriendly which will further enhance the reputation of local level. Summing up, no doubt international tourism is deep-routed issue, yet, world tour organisations by working shoulder to shoulder it can be fixed due to this people should be aware those are interested to spend holidays in another nations.
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international
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countries
.
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Some
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people
believe that overseas travelling is a
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negative
impact for their
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own
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nation
. This essays discusses the caused by
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global
travelling and suggests
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some
key remedies in the paragraphs below.

One convincing reason is that why
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some
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people
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think
that
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international
tourism is a
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bad
thing for their
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country
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because
number of
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people
went to
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international
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nations
to spend their
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vaccations
due to they forgave their culture and traditions, if they visited another
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country
they wear clothes according to their culture. As, these types of clothes are
totally
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different
as compared to
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global
tourism
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that individuals
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those who
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international
countries.

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, it is the responsibility of
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government
that they should
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make
strict
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rules
and regulations which will assist to control this problem.
As a result
,
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people
have fear to doing any
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evil in another
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nation
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because
individuals have no right to harm the culture of any
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nation
. Apart from that, authorities
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should aware
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people
and provide guidance and education to holiday maker which they spend holidays in
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global
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nations
.
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a news
published in newspaper,
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"
The Turbine
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revealed that
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of
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international
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countries
provide provisions to those
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people
who
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lived
in
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global
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nations
to accommodate the waste material time to time, it
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helps
to
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make
the environment
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ecofriendly
which will
further
enhance the reputation of local level.

Summing up, no doubt
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international
tourism is deep-routed issue,
yet
, world tour
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organisations
by working shoulder to shoulder it can be
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fixed
due to this
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people
should be aware those
are interested
to spend holidays in another
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nations
.
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IELTS essay Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country, what solutions can be taken to change negative attitude are the reasons and what

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
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