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Many parents think that it is good to help children with their homework, but others think that it is a duty of children to complete thier on homework. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many parents think that it is good to help children with their homework, but others think that it is a duty of children to complete thier on homework. VBYNA
It is commonly seen that younger ones often get assignment from school to do and they seek help from their elders. There are two different schools of thought regarding helping kids with their homework. Some people believe that it's good to provide assistance to younglings in completing their school's tasks while others argue that they should finish it on their own. Both views will be discussed before reaching a reasonable conclusion. The first and foremost why parents should help their offspring with homework is that it helps in the holistic development of children. It will increase interaction between them and they can develop a better interpersonal relationship. Moreover, parents can use examples for their experience and the real world which will enhance their learning. This also teaches a child to be optimistic and realistic in life. For instance, it is observed that children who are supported by parents often perform better in school and they do not feel ignored or neglected. On the otherhand, some people believe that child should do their work by themself because it will help them in their cognitive development. It enhances their technical and soft skills when they try to figure out their own problems. In addition, they find a different way to tackle the problem instead of the traditional way. They become more independent in life and this helps them later stages of life. Moreover, doing their job by themself also help them in developing positive personality traits like confidence which will eventually raise their self-esteem. So, completing the task on their own help in thriving better. In conclusion, many skills are learnt by a child with the supervision of a parent and without them as well. In my opinion, it depends on the capability of the child as well. Children should be left alone for concentrating better on their studies but also it is important to provide help whenever they need.
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seen
that younger ones
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often
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get
assignment from school to
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do and
they seek
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help
from their elders. There are two
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different
schools of
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thought
regarding helping kids with their homework.
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people
believe that it's
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good
to provide assistance to
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younglings
in completing their school's tasks while others argue that they should finish it on their
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own
. Both views will
be discussed
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before
reaching a reasonable conclusion.

The
first
and foremost why
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parents
should
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help
their offspring with homework is that it
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helps
in the holistic development of children. It will increase interaction between
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them and
they can develop a better interpersonal relationship.
Moreover
,
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parents
can
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use
examples for their experience and the real world which will enhance their learning. This
also
teaches a
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child
to be optimistic and realistic in life.
For instance
, it
is observed
that children who
are supported
by
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parents
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often
perform better in
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school and
they do not feel
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ignored
or neglected.

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otherhand
,
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some
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people
believe that
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child
should do their work by
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themself
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because
it will
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help
them in their cognitive development. It enhances their technical and soft
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skills
when they try to figure out their
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own
problems.
In addition
, they find a
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different
way to tackle the problem
instead
of the traditional way. They become more independent in life and this
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helps
them later stages of life.
Moreover
, doing their job by
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themself
also
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help
them in developing
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positive
personality traits like confidence which will
eventually
raise their self-esteem.
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So
, completing the task on their
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own
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help
in thriving better.

In conclusion
,
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many
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skills
are
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learnt
by a
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child
with the supervision of a
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parent
and without them
as well
. In my opinion, it depends on the capability of the
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child
as well
. Children should be
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left
alone for concentrating better on their studies
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but
also
it is
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important
to provide
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help
whenever they need.
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IELTS essay Many parents think that it is good to help children with their homework, but others think that it is a duty of children to complete thier on homework.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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