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Many newspapers print news information about private life of famous people. Why do they do it? What effect does it have on famous people’s life?

Many newspapers print news information about private life of famous people. Why do they do it? What effect does it have on famous people’s life? awQ0o
People tend to be aware of the latest news and particularly find the hidden sites of celebrities’ lives extremely attractive while reading daily papers. Newspapers are keeping introducing more and more articles about well-known personalities to their readers as it is beneficial in financial aspect and they don’t even consider the possible crucial consequences which can emerge as a result of their continuous activity. Articles on unknown life details of outstanding people have a huge audience and gain a tremendous quantity of views, hence they are one of the main income sources for their owners. Although this trick has been known for ages, it has not lost its popularity and effectiveness and is successfully used even nowadays leading to an increase in profit made by magazines. the bigger the scope of people interested in reading newspaper, the higher is the advertisement placement fee, so the revenue of the newspaper. Showing up the aspects of personal life which were intended to be kept in a secret sometimes becomes a cause of a drop in a mood whose secrets have been revealed. This breaks their zone of convenience and roughly violates their right to personal liberty. Many “victims” have confessed so far about the feeling of being pursued all the time even when there is nothing to worry about. Papers are only interested in obtaining revenue and do not feel any obstacles preventing from making it even if it can make the main heroes of their writings unhappy.
People
tend to be aware of the latest news and
particularly
find the hidden sites of celebrities’
lives
extremely
attractive while reading daily papers.

Newspapers are keeping introducing more and more articles about well-known personalities to their readers as it is beneficial in financial
aspect and
they don’t even consider the possible crucial consequences which can emerge
as a result
of their continuous activity.

Articles on unknown life
details
of outstanding
people
have a huge audience and gain a tremendous quantity of views,
hence
they are one of the main income sources for their owners. Although this trick has
been known
for ages, it has not lost its popularity and effectiveness and is
successfully
used
even nowadays leading to an increase in profit made by magazines.

the
bigger the scope of
people
interested in reading newspaper, the higher is the advertisement placement fee,
so
the revenue of the newspaper.

Showing up the aspects of personal life which
were intended
to be
kept
in a secret
sometimes
becomes a cause of a drop in a mood whose secrets have
been revealed
. This breaks their zone of convenience and roughly violates their right to personal liberty.

Many
“victims” have confessed
so
far about the feeling of
being pursued
all the time even when there is nothing to worry about.

Papers are
only
interested in obtaining revenue and do not feel any obstacles preventing from making it even if it can
make
the main heroes of their writings unhappy.
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IELTS essay Many newspapers print news information about private life of famous people. Why do they do it? What effect does it have on famous people’s life?

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