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Many historical places and museums are visited by tourists and not by local people . Why is it so? How can this trend be changed ? How can we improve tourism ?give your views on this topic

In my point of view, the main reason for the above is many people who visits tourist places are to be get relaxed in their holidays. Majority of local people avoid such visits because of less travelling and less interest to visit the museum more than once and many of them would have visited the place for at least once. To change the trend we can include attractive gardens or playing parks for children within the museum. This can improve the number of visitors including local people with their for more than once.

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