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Many countries raise fuel prices to deal successfully with problem of traffic and pollution

Many countries raise fuel prices to deal successfully with problem of traffic and pollution 2816
Today pollution and traffic become global issue. A number of countries hike fuel prices for come out but it is not only way to control it because it has created many bad impact over benefits. The biggest impact is on transportation cost. So, many things transport through different way such as roadway, air way and by sea and things like vegetables, milk, grocery, day to day products due to raising fuel prices it will direct impact on it’s rate. Hiking price of goods and commodities middle class peoples budget is disturb. In addition, it will effect tourism business due to the fact charges of fare is increasing. Consider the alternate option, Government should encourage public to use electric vehicle or hybrid vehicle which can run with fuel as well battery. Also promote to use public transportation over their private vehicle. For instance In Mumbai public use trains for their daily transportation. Government can create odd even system for vehicle uses it will control traffic as well pollution for example in Delhi this system successfully has been working. In more government should build sufficient infrastructure to maintain traffic conjunction such as enough road size, bridges, flyover, make separate lane for each type vehicle. Maintain pollution in range plant more and more trees on road side as well arrange talk by experts for awareness. Implements rules and regulation related to traffic and pollution strictly such as vehicle should certified by PUC should must follow traffic sign. Merely raising fuel price is not solution for outcome from this situation consequently you should have to think another way for control pollution and conjunction of traffic.
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Today
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pollution
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traffic
become global issue. A number of countries hike
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fuel
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prices
for
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come
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impact over benefits.

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many
things transport through
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different
way such as roadway, air way and by sea and things like vegetables, milk, grocery, day to day products due to raising
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fuel
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prices
it will direct impact
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on it’s rate
. Hiking
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price
of
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goods
and commodities middle
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peoples budget is disturb.
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tourism business due to the fact charges of fare is increasing.

Consider the alternate option,
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Government
should encourage public to
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use
electric
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vehicle
or hybrid
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vehicle
which can run with
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fuel
as well
battery.
Also
promote to
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use
public transportation over their private
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vehicle
.
For instance
In Mumbai public
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use
trains for their daily transportation.
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Government
can create odd even system for
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vehicle
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uses
it will control
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traffic
as well
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pollution
for example
in Delhi this system
successfully
has been working.

In more
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government
should build sufficient infrastructure to maintain
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traffic
conjunction such as
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enough
road size, bridges, flyover,
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make
separate lane for each type
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vehicle
. Maintain
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pollution
in range plant more and more trees on road side
as well
arrange talk by experts for awareness. Implements
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rules
and regulation related to
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traffic
and
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pollution
strictly
such as
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vehicle
should
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certified
by PUC should
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must
follow
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traffic
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sign
.

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raising
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fuel
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price
is not solution for outcome from this situation
consequently
you should
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have to
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think
another way for control
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pollution
and conjunction of
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traffic
.

IELTS essay Many countries raise fuel prices to deal successfully with problem of traffic and pollution

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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