Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Many countries increase the amount of household garbage going to landfill every year. What are the causes and what can be done to reduce it?

Many countries increase the amount of household garbage going to landfill every year. What are the causes and what can be done to reduce it? BJgxw
At the present time, the amount of everyday misuse has been increased significantly and it is going to landfill annually. When observed, there are many reasons for such rises. However, this can be solved by some appropriate steps. Both, the causes as well as the solutions are discussed in the ensuing paragraphs. Examining the reasons for the surging of the waste at the household, the prime reason is that the change in the lifestyle of people. To elaborate this, people decorate their homes and also renovate their very often. They replaced the commodities for more and varied availability of products. For instance, people buy a simple flower pot to decorate their home, but after use it for some time, they not like that flower pot and they throw into the dustbin and purchase the new one. Therefore, it causes the waste. Moreover, nowadays the consumerism of the individuals is also changed. People these days buy more than needed and thus more garbage. The other reason is that the over packaging of the products and most of the use of the plastics. To explain this, in the market, the packing of the products is unnecessary and fancier. Therefore, this consists the maximum amount of the waste because most of the packaging is done by the use of plastics. These are the reasons for increasing the amount of wastes at homes. However, this issue can be solved by some remarkable steps. The first step is introducing strict norms. The authorities should introduce some rules and regulations for the general public to recycle and reuse some garbage domestically. The government should ban the production of the plastics. The second step is the media promotion. Media is responsible to spread awareness regarding the problems as well as the solutions of the household garbage. It is also the responsibility of the individuals to reuse some products before disposal and do some recycling methods in the home. The best example of the recycling is the bio gas plant. Therefore, these are some solutions and it can be reduced this issue to some extent in the world wide, To recapitulate, there are many different factors that have led to rising levels of household wastes on the earth. While, it may be not possible to find the complete solution, any action should be probably involved by encouraging the public for recycling at the home and the administration should be ban the use of the plastics.
At the present time, the amount of everyday misuse has
been increased
significantly
and it is going to landfill
annually
. When observed, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
for such rises.
However
, this can
be solved
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
appropriate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
steps
. Both, the causes
Probable usage error. Use "and" after 'both'.
as well as
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solutions
are discussed
in the ensuing paragraphs.

Examining the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
for the surging of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
at the household, the prime
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reason
is that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the lifestyle of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. To elaborate this,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
decorate their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
homes
and
also
renovate their
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
. They replaced the commodities for more and varied availability of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
.
For instance
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a simple flower pot to decorate their home,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
after
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time, they not like that flower
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
pot and
they throw into the dustbin and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
the new one.
Therefore
, it causes the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
.
Moreover
, nowadays the consumerism of the individuals is
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
these days
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
more than needed and
thus
more garbage. The other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reason
is that the over packaging of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
and most of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastics
. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
this, in the market, the packing of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
is unnecessary and fancier.
Therefore
, this consists the maximum amount of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
most of the packaging
is done
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastics
. These are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
for increasing the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
at homes.

However
, this issue can
be solved
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
remarkable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
steps
. The
first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
step
is introducing strict norms. The authorities should introduce
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations for the
Consider using "public".
general public
to recycle and reuse
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
garbage
domestically
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should ban the production of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastics
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
second
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
step
is the media promotion. Media
You should probably use: "are" or "were".
is
responsible to spread awareness regarding the problems
as well
as the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solutions
of the household garbage. It is
also
the responsibility of the individuals to reuse
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
disposal and do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
recycling methods in the home. The best example of the recycling is the
This word is normally spelled as one.
bio gas
plant.
Therefore
, these are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solutions
and it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
this issue to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extent in the
Did you mean "worldwide"?
world wide
,

To recapitulate, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
factors that have led to rising levels of household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
on the earth. While, it may be not possible to find the complete
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solution
, any action should be
probably
involved by encouraging the public for recycling at the home and the administration should be
Did you mean "banned"?
ban
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastics
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Many countries increase the amount of household garbage going to landfill every year. What are the causes and what can be done to reduce it?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
407 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts